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急~誰可以幫我翻譯一下這篇故事??? (故事名:加淚的咖啡)

加淚的咖啡

門上的鈴噹響了起來,一個年約三十歲,穿著筆挺西服的男人,

走進了這家飄散著濃濃咖啡香的小小咖啡廳。

『午安!歡迎光臨!』年輕的老闆娘親切地招呼著。

男人一面客氣地微微點了點頭,

一面走到吧台前的位子坐了下來。

開口對老闆娘說:「麻煩給我一杯摩卡,謝謝。」

『好的,請稍候。』老闆娘微笑著說。

接著便開始熟練地磨碎咖啡豆,煮起咖啡來。

男人一直帶著笑容看著老闆娘煮咖啡的動作,

似乎對這樣的景像感到相當喜歡。

過了沒多久,老闆娘便將一杯香醇的咖啡端到男人的面前

『請慢用!!』

「謝謝。」男人將杯子拿到嘴邊,淺淺地嚐了一口。

『第一次來嗎??』老闆娘問。

「是啊!!」男人答。

『覺得我們這家店怎麼樣?』

「很不錯!氣氛很好!」

『我自己也是很喜歡,所以雖然生意不好,

我和我先生卻還是捨不得把它關掉。』

「嗯....」男人好似有所同感地點了點頭,又喝了一口咖啡。

兩人沈默了一會,使得空盪的店裡只剩下悠揚爵士音樂。這時男人忽然開了口,

打破了這短暫的寧靜。

「呃...不好意思,可以請教妳一個問題嗎?」

『什麼問題呢?』老闆娘好奇地問。

「嗯...這..這該怎麼說好呢?」男人抓著頭,一副不知所措的樣子。

「妳可以先聽我說個故事嗎?」

老闆娘點了點頭,示意男人繼續說下去。

「我以前有個很要好的女朋友,已經到了要論及婚嫁的地步。

我和她之間的感情發展得相當平凡,並不是什麼經過大風大浪、

轟轟烈烈般的愛情。

但我想從我第一眼看到她的時候,就彷佛有一股魔力,

有一個聲音,在推動著我,

在告訴著我,就是她了!她就是我一直期待著的女孩。

更令我高興的是她也回應了我的示愛,接受了我。

這一切的順利讓我整個人陶醉於幸褔的喜悅之中,只不過...」

『只不過!發生了什麼事了嗎?』老闆娘打斷了男人的話。

「嗯...」男人臉色沈了下來,略微停頓了一下後

,又繼續開口說下去。

「只不過我忘了幸褔的背後,往往藏匿著最可怕的惡魔。

就在我們訂婚前一個月的一個晚上,

她...她卻遭到歹徒的強暴...」

『啊!』老闆娘驚訝地啊的一聲叫了出來。

「都怪我!要是我那天堅持送她回去就好了!」男人用力地搥打著桌面,

使得杯子中的咖啡因劇烈的震動而灑了出來。

『你要我問的該不會就是這個吧!』

老闆娘一面擦拭著灑出來的咖啡一面說。

「不!不是的!我對她的感情不會因為這樣而有所動搖,

我決定仍舊如期訂婚,可惜就在我們訂婚的那一天,她...上吊自殺了」男人說話的語調十分地平靜,但從他的表情上看得出,當時的他是多麼的難過與震驚。

『自殺!那她有沒有怎麼樣?』

老闆娘睜大了眼睛,緊張的看著男人。

「幸運的是我們發現得早,送到醫院時還有氣,只是腦部因為長時間缺氧,

而呈現昏迷狀態,甚至一度有成為植物人的危險。」

『那她後來有醒過來嗎?』

「有的,她醒了!」

「但..但當我得知她醒了的消息,高興地要去看她時,

卻被她父母給攔在門外。」

『為什麼?她父母為什麼不讓你去看她?』

「當她父母跪在地上求我的時候,我才知道原來她失去了記憶,

失去了認識我以後的記憶,

醫生說這是選擇性失憶症,當人在遭遇極大的打擊時,

會逃避性的藏起一些記憶。

她父母求我暫時不要再出現在他面前,

他們認為讓她就這樣忘了之前的一切對她比較好,

怕我要是去見她或許會讓她回想起來,到時她可能又會陷入昏迷,

甚至又跑去自殺。」

『她父母這麼說也是有道理,反正只是暫時嘛!等他情緒和身體都穩定

了,你就又可以見她啦!』老闆娘聽了男人的話後這樣說著。

Update:

男人對著老闆娘微微笑了笑後說:

「妳知道他們的暫時指的是多久嗎?是十年啊!

就是這十年裡我得要忍受這樣沒有她的日子,就算偶爾在路上踫面,也得要裝作陌生人一般地和她擦肩而過。妳知道這樣的日子有多難熬,這樣想愛卻又不能愛的心情有多痛苦!!」

男人用著近乎咆哮似的聲音吼著。

『雖然會很痛苦,但你還是選擇了這條路吧!』

老闆娘用著憐憫的眼神看著男人。

Update 2:

老闆娘的眼神讓男人冷靜了下來,點頭說:

「嗯!!而且到今天就滿十年了!!」

「哦!真的嗎!?那真是恭禧了,你努力撐了十年,

到今天終於可以去見她了!」

老闆娘開心地說。

「是這樣沒錯!但是愈到這一天,我反倒愈害怕。十年了,我的心意是沒有變,但是她呢??如果我跟她說了以前的事,她還是想不起我那怎樣辦?或者是她已經有男朋友,甚至於結婚了呢?」

「這就是我想教妳的問題!」

男人似乎略帶緊張的看著眼前年輕的女店主,靜靜地等待著她的答覆。

Update 3:

『嗯.....』老闆娘用手托著頭,

臉色凝重的想著男人所提的問題。

『我想既然你這麼愛那個女孩,她記不記得你其實並不重要,最多是重新開始而已,再重新追求她一次,再重新談一次戀愛,其實也很不錯吧!而且就算有男朋友了也沒關係啊!把她從他手中搶過來不就行了嗎!』老闆娘笑著說。

『但是!』她忽然將表情嚴肅了起來。

『但是如果她已經結婚了的話,那你就放棄吧!

我們結了婚的人啊!是最痛恨有人破壞人家家庭的了!』  

Update 4:

「是嗎?」男人低著頭冷寞地說。

『沒錯!所以你可千萬別做個破壞別人家庭的人哦!』

叮呤!掛在門上鈴鐺又響了起來,走進來幾個剛下課的大學生,老闆娘走出吧台,忙著招呼這幾位新來的客人。

『對了!』老闆娘好像忽然想到了什麼,轉過頭來看著男人。

『你為什麼會想問我這些啊!我和你不過是第一次見面而已啊!』她好奇地問。

「嗯...為什麼呢...大概是因為那個女孩曾說過,結婚以後要和我一起開一家像這樣的咖啡廳吧!」

『哦!原來是這樣子啊!』老闆娘說。

Update 5:

「嗯!只是這樣而已!只是這樣而已!只是這樣而已!是......」男人不停地重覆著同樣一句話,就好像在藉此告訴自己什麼似的。

爵士樂停了下來,

使得整個屋子裡,只剩下大學生談笑的聲音。

男人低著頭偷偷地瞄著老闆娘手上的結婚戒指,

一滴溫暖的眼淚,悄悄地滑進了那杯早已冷卻的咖啡裡。

Update 6:

阿~~玉米!!你沒有翻譯完!~ ^_^" 能不能把後面的補充上去?!謝謝嚕~~ @.@

Update 7:

那可以在意見那邊補充嗎?? >"

Update 8:

mmm......ok!那能不能寄到 lanian_bebe@yahoo.com.tw

謝啦~~ ^_^

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    1 decade ago
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        The Coffee with Tears

      The bell rang. A thirty-year-old man in a well suit came into this coffee shop.

      “Good day! Welcome!” said the young lady who owned the shop with her friendly smile. The man nodded genteelly and chose the seat in front of the bar. “A cup of mocha, please!” he said to her. “OK, please wait for a second.” she answered kindly then got to work artfully. The man never took his eyes off her, it seemed he like the scene of working very much. Soon, she showed an appetizing coffee to him. “Here you are!” “Thanks!” He took the cup nearby his mouth and had a taste of the coffee.

       “Is it the first time you come here?” asked the lady. “Yes.” He answered.

      “How do you feel about my shop?”

      “Pretty good! I like it.”

      “Me too. That's why my husband and I don't want to close it down though it earned little.”

      “M…” the man nodded his agreement and took another sip of his coffee.

    It had been silent for a while, seemed no sound except the jazz music. Then the man found his tongue and broke the big silence.

      “Excuse me. May I ask you a question?” said the man finally. “What kind of question?” She asked him back curiously.

    He became hesitating and scratched his head bashfully. “Could you please listen to a story on me?” She nodded to make him continue.

      “I had a girlfriend before. We were almost going to marry. Our love was common not on a grand and spectacular scale. But when I saw her first time, there was a voice telling me that she is just the one, the one I’d been waiting for. Fortunately, she accepted me. I was just intoxicated in the great luck and happiness. However…”

      “However? What's happened?” She interrupted him.

      He paused for a while and went on with sorrow. “However I forgot there's always a most evil devil behind happiness. A night just a month before our betrothal, she was raped…”

      “Ah…” She screamed out accidentally.

      “It's my entire fault! Nothing would have been happened if I saw her to the door!”

      “Would you like do ask me this?” She said and cleaned the table splashed by coffee.

    2006-04-19 00:17:29 補充:

    超過兩千個字了... 他不讓我補充!

    2006-04-19 14:29:00 補充:

    “No. Of course not! I wouldn’t change my love for this! I decided keeping the betrothal date as before. But she hanged herself on that day.” He is quite calm when he spoke. But she could tell the sorrow on his face.

    “Hanged? Did she…?” she stared him nervously.

    2006-04-19 14:29:29 補充:

    “Fortunately, we found her early enough. She was still alive when we carried her to the hospital. But her brain was out of oxygen too long. She was in a coma, and nearly became a vegetable.”

    “Did she waken then?”

    “Yes, she did. But I was kept off her room when I gladly went to see her.”

    2006-04-19 14:30:53 補充:

    “Why? Why didn’t they let you see her?”

    “As her parents knelt down to request me, I finally knew that she lose her memory. She forgot everything happened after she knew me. The doctor said it is for a while. It happened when one was terribly shocked.

    2006-04-19 14:31:31 補充:

    Her parents asked me not to see her, it would be better for her to forget all of this. In case she could be shocked or even commit suicide again.” The man said, with a deep sorrow.

    2006-04-19 14:31:42 補充:

    “It might be reasonable they said. Anyway it’s just for a while! After her body and mind become recovered to health, you can see her again!” She told him after she listened to him.

    2006-04-19 14:33:38 補充:

    太多了啦... 翻譯這麼多, 還不到你補充的地方唷! 這樣還要補充30次以上才夠吧~ 看是給信箱還是什麼的比較快, 我怕一連補充三十幾次, 你的問題會被檢舉.

    2006-04-20 22:48:03 補充:

    寄給你了喔!!

    Source(s): 只能回答兩千個字耶 怎麼辦
  • 1 decade ago

    Coffee with tears

    The bell on the door has been sounded, one is annual about 30 years old , the man in straight suit,

    Fly away thick coffee in the fragrant small coffee shop after coming into this.

    "Good afternoon! You are welcome! "The young shopkeeper wife is greeting cordially.

    Man side nodded slightly courteously,

    Seat that side walked up to bar counter sit down.

    The opening is said to the shopkeeper wife: ' the trouble gives me a cup to rub the card , thanks. '

    "OK, please wait a moment. "The shopkeeper wife says smiling.

    Then begin to rub the garrulous coffee bean skillfully , boil coffee.

    The man has been seeing the shopkeeper wife boiling movements of coffee taking the smile all the time ,

    Seem to feel and quite like about such scene picture.

    Having crossed it soon, the shopkeeper wife carries a cup of aromatic coffee to in front of the man

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