Anonymous
Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我評論一下我的講稿〈英文〉,看看哪裡有錯,拜託,這個很急

這是翻譯軟體翻的,可能有錯,請幫忙看一下感激不盡

Do you believe one person dies in the whole world the smoking every ten seconds? Most who smoke is a period beginning in teenager to smoke, and the reason usually is very strange, the friend incites or is for proving the oneself has already grown up, but they don\'t know more young get in touch with these things, to the healthy bane also more deep.

Have several kinds of harmful compositions in cigarette, be like the nicotine, carbon monoxide, and carcinogen, if teenager smoking, not only breathe the way and will damage, even influence the lung department function, but also will make the amount of metabolism of the oxygen reduced because of the smoking, influence the exercise the performance, and the one who smoke the life expectancy of compare generally not cigarette reduces the decade

But why have the person still is taken no cognizance in these results, still continue to smoke, in addition to cigarette having of addiction material, the mental factor is most important, many persons of smoking all think own luck didn\'t be so not good, will not become sick, going to the body to appear strange appearance, usually all already in last phase, so we shouldn\'t contain the fluky mindset, wanting the resolute brush-off smoking.

If is haven\'t yet been infected by smoke habitual person, please continue to keep next go to, at other people encourage you to smoke, good like consider, don\'t let all arise from one wrong idea to personal prospect and cause healthily injury, just through have already smoked habitual person, also ask to immediately make a firm decision now, don\'t want Be making an excuse for the oneself, quickly gives out this bad habit, healthily just is most important, so for safeguarding our health, ask loudly of say toward the smoking \"not\".

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  • Al
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
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    請別再用翻譯機,光抓懂原來你想表達什麼,就耗了不少時間,就原意幫你較簡單的修正,再與同學討論吧!

    Do you believe that there is one person (who) dies of the smoking every ten seconds in the whole world? Most of people who smoke begin at their teeage period , and the reason is usually attributed to curiosity, friend's seduction or prove of oneself being a grown-up, but they don't know the more they get involve with these things, the more harmfulness they would get to their health.

    There are several kinds of harmful compositions in cigarette, for example, the nicotine, carbon monoxide, and carcinogen,. If teenager smoke, it would not only damage the lung function, but also reduce the frequency of oxygen metabolism of the oxygen. and it's been proved that the life of those smoke is shorter than those are not smoke.

    But why people still ignore these facts and continue to smoke? Though cigarette is easy to get addictive for it's component, the mentality factor is also important. People are always think they will not be so unlucky to get sick from the lung desease. But it is often to see that they are already at their deadly last phase of the lung desease when they feel sick. So we should not be stubborn, and we should quit smoking with determination before it's to late.

    For those who still without the bad habbit of smoking, please keep on not to be contaminated. When someone encourages you to smoke, take good consideration. It is for your own good, don't let other person's bad idea hurt your health. At the same time, you should persuade your smoker friends to give up smoking. Make no excuses but just determination to get away from smoking. After all, health is more important than smoking.

    Let us say "No!" loudly and together to smoking .

    2006-04-09 12:52:42 補充:

    修正1.:Do you believe that there is one person (who) dies of (the刪) smoking .......? Most .... at their teeage (period改成stage) , and the reason(s) are usually attributed to curiosity, friend's (seduction改成misguiding influence) or (加wanting to) prove of (oneself改成themselves) being a grown-up

    2006-04-09 12:55:11 補充:

    修正2.:

    If teenager smoke, (it改cigarette) would not only damage (the改our) lung function, but also (reduce改slow down) the frequency of (the) metabolism of the oxygen (inside our body). (A)nd it's.....

    Though cigarette is easy to get addictive (加 once you smoke)

    2006-04-09 12:56:41 補充:

    修正3.第三段

    Make no excuses but just (加need more) determination to get away from smoking. After all, health is more important than smoking. (加 Don't you think so?)

  • 1 decade ago

    Do you believe one person dies in the whole world the smoking every ten seconds? Most who smoke is a period beginning in teenager to smoke, and the reason usually is very strange, the friend incites or is for proving the one has already grown up, but they don't know younger get in touch with these things, to the healthy bane also deeper.

    Have several kinds of harmful compositions in cigarette, be like the nicotine, carbon monoxide, and carcinogen, if teenager smoking, not only breathe the way and will damage, even influence the lung department function, but also will make the amount of metabolism of the oxygen reduced because of the smoking, influence the exercise the performance, and the one who smoke the life expectancy of compare generally not cigarette reduces the decade

    But why have the person still is taken no cognizance in these results, still continue to smoke, in addition to cigarette having of addiction material, the mental factor is most important, many persons of smoking all think own luck didn't be so not good, will not become sick, going to the body to appear strange appearance, usually all already in last phase, so we shouldn't contain the fluky mindset, wanting the resolute brush-off smoking.

    If is haven't yet been infected by smoke habitual person, please continue to keep next go to, at other people encourage you to smoke, good like consider, don't let all arise from one wrong idea to personal prospect and cause healthily injury, just through have already smoked habitual person, also ask to immediately make a firm decision now, don't want Be making an excuse for the oneself, quickly gives out this bad habit, healthily just is most important, so for safeguarding our health, ask loudly of say toward the smoking "not".

    光是看文法上只有三個小錯誤

    已經幫你修正了

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