請幫我修一下英文口試~”我最愛雨天”

My favorite weather is a rainy day. If I were outside it would be very inconvenient. Regardless of go shopping or take a walk. But if I were at home, I always walk to the courtyard and drop the rainwater on my head. Look at the ashy sky. Many little things that we forgotten always can be aroused. Someone ever told... show more My favorite weather is a rainy day.
If I were outside it would be very inconvenient. Regardless of go shopping or take a walk. But if I were at home, I always walk to the courtyard and drop the rainwater on my head. Look at the ashy sky. Many little things that we forgotten always can be aroused. Someone ever told me “the rainy days let me in the bad moon and attach to the impulsion to cry. All the tears haunt my past…”
But I am a person who like think about everything. About rainy days, it include a lot of memories. I often played in my courtyard after rain in my childhood. Now, I image a guy would take an umbrella to wait me and just look at me one in a rainy day. It’s about the meaning of rainy days.
A rain will be lovely because summer is coming. If rain in winter it would be cold. But if rain in summer it would be cool. Almost take a walk outside. I believe rainy can be happy if you willing to find out.

英文oral要用的~
可以的話 幫我多加一些東西 因為好像有點太短
文意上也不通順
請大家幫我改一下!!
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