? asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

我的英文日記幫我檢查是否有錯

Today was Tomb Sweeping Day ,so I didn\'t go to English school.

My parants was went to cleaned graves,but I caught went to with my family.

When they went to grave,I was stay home take care of my cousin.

My mom asked me stay home ,otherwise she will cut my finger.

My cousin only one a half years,so she wasn\'t talked to me.

When she was hungry,she just cry to looking for me.

I don\'t know what does she mean,so I called her mom come back.

When her mom was come back , she was runed to hold her mom.

Today is a hard day , I don\'t want to take care of cousin again.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Today was Tomb Sweeping Day ,so I didn't go to English school.

    =我覺得沒地方必須改

    My parants was went to cleaned graves,but I caught went to with my family.

    =My parents went to clean up graves, but I could not go with my family

    When they went to grave,I was stay home take care of my cousin.

    =When they went to the grave, I stayed home to take care of my cousin.

    My mom asked me stay home ,otherwise she will cut my finger.

    =My mom asked me to stay home, or else she would cut my fingers off.(殘酷...)

    My cousin only one a half years,so she wasn't talked to me.

    =My cousin was only one and a half years old, so she could not talk to me.

    When she was hungry,she just cry to looking for me.

    =When she got hungry, she would cry and come looking for me.

    I don't know what does she mean,so I called her mom come back.

    =I did not know what she wanted, so I called her mom and asked her to come back.

    When her mom was come back , she was runed to hold her mom.

    =When her mom was back, she ran to hold her mom.

    Today is a hard day , I don't want to take care of cousin again

    =Today was a hard day. I don't want to take care of cousin anymore.

    希望符合您本意

    2006-04-07 09:59:18 補充:

    今天today,就不能用過去式was<=我朋友說如果已經晚上了他想要用過去式也是可以的

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  • Jim
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    1 decade ago

    Today was Tomb Sweeping Day ,so I didn't go to English school.

    →It's Tomb Sweeping festival today, I didn't go to English class.(今天today,就不能用過去式was)

    My parants was went to cleaned graves,but I caught went to with my family.

    →My parants went me to sweep the graves, But I couldn't go with them. (在此用clean有點像清掉剷除,故不宜)

    When they went to grave,I was stay home take care of my cousin.

    →When they left, I stayed at home and take care of my cousin.(went to grave??父母健在,沒進墳墓,勿詛咒)

    My mom asked me stay home ,otherwise she will cut my finger.

    →My mom asked me to stay at home, Otherwise she will cut my finger.(注意介系詞)

    My cousin only one a half years,so she wasn't talked to me.

    →My cousin is only one and half year-old, So she couldn't possible talked to me. (你應該是說,他才一歲半,不可能跟我說話)

    When she was hungry,she just cry to looking for me.

    →When she was hungry, She is just crying to find me.(哭著找我)

    I don't know what does she mean,so I called her mom come back.

    →I didn't know what she mean, So I called her mom back.

    When her mom was come back , she was runed to hold her mom.

    →When her mom was back , she just ran and hold her mom.(run的過去式是ran,一歲半會跑?)

    Today is a hard day , I don't want to take care of cousin again.

    →It's suffering today, I won't take care of my cousin anymore.(形容今天是難過痛苦的一天用suffering)

    2006-04-06 13:02:44 補充:

    第二句更正一字 My parants want me to sweep the graves

    Source(s): 英語專門
  • 1 decade ago

    Today was Ching Ming Festival, so I didn't go to English school.

    My parents went to clean graves, but I couldn't go with them.

    When they cleaned the graves, I stayed home to take care of my cousin.

    My mom asked me to stay at home, otherwise she would cut my fingers.

    My cousin was only one and a half years old, so she couldn't talk to me.

    When she was hungry, she just cried to get my attention.

    I didn't know what she wanted, so I called my aunt to come back.

    When my aunt came back, my cousin ran to her.

    Today was a hard day, I don't want to take care of my cousin anymore.

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