Aliot asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

自我介紹英文校正 高手請進

各位教授大家好,我的名字叫做XXX,目前是就讀於XXX。我家住在XX,今天早上是撘了兩個小時左右的公車到貴校來的,如果有幸能夠進入貴校就讀,我會希望能夠住在貴校的學生宿舍,一方面省下不少車錢,但是最重要的是能省下上下學通車的時間的話,相信對我在課後學習會有很大的幫助。ok.題外話。我的家中一共有五位成員,分別還有我的父母親及一個姊姊和一個弟弟。因為父親正面的影響,我從小就對電腦和英文非常有興趣,也在國小時就立下了將來一定要往這方面發展的志願。我平時的嗜好是使用電腦和打籃球,曾經在國中時對架設網站和用VB寫一些小程式很有興趣,也有去買書來研究,但是到了高中,因為學校並沒有任何和電腦有關的課程,加上繁重的升學壓力,只好在這方面暫時作出割捨,期望能等到進入大學相關科系後,再來全心全力的往這方面發展。以上是我的自我介紹,謝謝!

Good morning, professors. My name is XXX, I\'m now studying in XXX school. My house is located in XX, I took a two-hour bus to your school this morning. If I have the honor of being a student of your school, I would like to stay in your dormitory. Because I can not only economize on money, but also have more time to focus on my after-school studies and increase the relationship with others. There are five members of my family. Except for my parents, I also have an older sister and a younger brother. Owing to my father\'s positive influence, I\'ve been interested in computers and English since I was only a child, and I also made a aspiration to develop in this area. My hobbies are using computers and playing basketball. When I was in junior high school, I found that making a website and trying to write some little software with Visual Basic was really interesting, and I also bought some books to study. But when I became a senior high school student, there are much more pressures on studies, so I had no choice but to stop learning those what I like temporarily, hoping to make my every efforts when I get into the college. That\'s all for my self-introduction. Thank you for your listening.

Update:

你說的問題我有想過..

可是後來我想

那些問題不就是面試教授會問的問題嗎?

有必要在自我介紹就將那些說出來嗎?@@

Update 2:

用I've been?

不對吧 這代表我從以前到現在一直都在這學校唸書

這用法錯了 我國一時就問過老師這問題了

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Good morning, professors. My name is XXX, I'm now studying in XXX school.

    It's really glad to have a chance to introduce why I'd like to apply this program to you.

    Because of my father, I am interested in Computer skill learning and English since I was a child. I take computer related field as my future study long time ago since I was 12 year old child. I did quite a lot self-learning about internet structuring and programming when I was in junior high. However, we didn't have any computer related courses in senior high school. And as everybody knows, the pressure of study made me to put it aside. But I do want to fulfill my dream which is to know more and learn more about computer related field. As I know, one of this school's expertise is computer related field program and I'm so excited that I could have a chance to be here.

    Thank you for your patience.

    如果你是為了要做徵試的面試! 我想,重點應該是1. 為什麼想唸這個科系 2. 這個學校為什麼吸引你

    所以我沒有放家人介紹跟籃球 還有想住宿舍....

    2006-04-01 00:48:29 補充:

    因為你寫的中文的部份比較不結構化!! 重點看起來是放在我問的那兩個問題!如果要介紹自己的話, 其實可以在一開始的時候就全部介紹完!!不過,站在教授的立場, 你認為他們希望聽到的是什麼樣的介紹呢? 我的建議是, 放比較多跟personality相關的東西, 可能會比較吸引人! 像是個性啦, 喜好....但是, 總覺得,教授會對你自己對自己的規劃比較有興趣!! (也就是為什麼想要來我們學校, 為什麼選這個科系)自我介紹的重點是希望對方能在很短的時間內瞭解你, 而且對你印象深刻!!所以可以朝這個方向想~希望對你有幫助!!

    2006-04-01 00:54:43 補充:

    I was born in _____(Taipei). There are 5 members in my family. They are my parents, an elder sister and a younger brother. (可以用和弟弟常一起打球之類的) Therefore, Basketball is always my favourit exercise. Besides study, I like to study compter related books, and playing basketball. (電腦快沒電了! 可以先想想你的內容~)

    2006-04-01 21:37:13 補充:

    Besides study, I like to study compter related books, and playing basketball during my leisure time. I think basketball is really a good excercise not only because to play but to cultivate how to collaborate with others.

    2006-04-01 21:38:48 補充:

    Since then, I'd like to stay in the school accomondation after enterning the university which could make me has more time to do after-class study and join clubs. The reason I'd like to choose this program is (三次的補充連在一起,接在 "Good morning, ....XXX school. "後面)

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  • 1 decade ago

    Good morning, professors. My name is XXX, (now I'm) studying in XXX school. My house is located in XX, I took a two-hour bus to (the) school this morning. If I have the honor of being a student of your school, I would like to stay in your dormitory. Because I can not only economize on money, but also have more time to focus on my after-school studies and increase the relationship with others. There are five members of my family. Except for my parents, I also have an older sister and a younger brother. Owing to my father's positive influence, I've been interested in computers and English since I was only a child, and I also made a aspiration to develop in this area. My hobbies are using computers and playing basketball. When I was in junior high school, I found that making a website and trying to write some little software with Visual Basic was really interesting, and I also bought some books to study. But when I became a senior high school student, there are much more pressures on studies, so I had no choice but to stop learning those what I like temporarily, hoping to make my every efforts when I get into the college. That's all for my self-introduction. Thank you for your listening.

    其實你寫的很好

    講給外國人聽

    他們一定懂得阿

    你是要我們check grammar 還是什麼阿?

    good啦^^

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  • 1 decade ago

    I'm now studying in XXX school. 應該用

    I've been studying in XXX school.比較好

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