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Packing For a Year Abroad If I had the chance for a trip for a year abroad, I hope I could go to Europe where I have dreamed day and night. I could admire modern industries, experiencing various kinds of culture, enjoying native-born people’s enthusiasm at there. At first, I hope to visit museums because... show more Packing For a Year Abroad
If I had the chance for a trip for a year abroad, I hope I could go to Europe where I have dreamed day and night. I could admire modern industries, experiencing various kinds of culture, enjoying native-born people’s enthusiasm at there.
At first, I hope to visit museums because their higher civilizations which had industrialization in nineteenth century. Then, I would like to tour aged historic monuments which had been structured for hundreds year. Beside, to appreciate exhibition of paintings that had descended from owe-respecting painters.
I will keep learning attitude to understand foreign culture, although I probably meet culture shock. Learning their merits to better our shortcomings is the way to progress myself day by day.
In conclusion, packing for a year abroad can broaden my horizons, expanding my views. There are a lot of goods waiting for me to explore.
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