kira asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

超級急急急~各位達人~幫我修改這篇爛文章好嗎!能像樣點就好!

相信對於賭場大家並不陌生,但對於由此興盛的賭城,大家卻抱有不同的看法。就我們而言,賭場並不是個有易於社會的產物。

人說小賭怡情,但大賭卻是傷身。像某些人總是想著一夜致富,於是不分日夜的賭,錢賠光了再借,借了又賭,如此循環,許多人為此而傾家蕩產,妻離子散。相反的,對賭場來說,這卻是他們促進地方繁榮的重要來源。

但就我們而言,它只是個出外玩樂可以去看看的一個地方。並不是耗著大把時間大把金錢,最後換取來的卻是種種的後悔。總之,我們不贊成這種等著千萬分之一的好運送上門的機率,人還是腳踏實地點好!

          What your point of view about casino

  Believed everybody isn\'t unfamiliar about casino, but regarding so prosperous sin city, everyone the viewpoint that embraces to have the dissimilarity. Speaking of we, the casino certainly is not has the advantage to the society of product.

  The person said the small gambling is joyful, but big gambling is harms the body. Be like some persons to always think a night becomes rich, and doesn\'t divide the day and night gambling, money lost to borrow again, borrowing to gambling again, so circulating, lots of people go bankrupt for this, and breaks up a family. Contrary of , casino is they promotes the prosperous important origin.

  But as for us, It just is a place which goes out the amusement to be allowed to visit. Is not spend lots of time and money, finally gain all of regretting. In a word, we don\'t approve this kind of waits for 1/10000000 probability, the person don\'t make the daydream are better.

上面中文是我打的草稿,下面是我用翻譯往一句一句慢慢用的!希望有比較接近原意!由於本人英文爛到爆~所以想找達人朋友們幫我批改批改~感激不盡啦!3Q! 

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    I believe everybody will not feel unfamiliar with casino but we share different points of views regarding a gambling city whose prosperity results from casino. To us, casino by no means is a product that will be conducive to society.

    As a saying goes, gambling with little amount is enjoyable but with huge amount harmful. Somebody keeps thinking that fortune will come one day, and therefore gambles day in, day out. With a cycle of borrowing money and using all on gambling, many people spent go bankrupt and their family breaks up. Conversely, these all are the main source for casino to boost their prosperity.

    We think that casino is the place we can go visiting during our travel but it is not a place where we should waste our time and money in exchange of only regrets. All in all, we do not approve of the act of awaiting good luck to come, whose probability is so slim . It is after all better for people to live their lives in a more practical way!

    2006-03-24 23:43:21 補充:

    many people spent go bankrupt and their family breaks upSorry, it should be "many people go bankrupt and their family breaks up"

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    6 years ago

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