芽衣 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 2 decades ago

請幫我修修這段英文~~

Though I like rabbits verry much

but my family does not allow me to raise

I hope oneday I will have a chance to raise one

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  • 2 decades ago
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    raise=養(小孩),動物不能用raise

    我幫你改一下:

    Although I like rabbits very much, my parents do not allow me to keep one at home. I hope someday I can have one.

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  • 2 decades ago

    Though I like rabbits verry much, my family does not allow me to raise one. I hope one day I will have a chance to raise one.

  • 2 decades ago

    Though I like rabbits verry much

    but my family does not allow me to have one

    I hope oneday I will have a chance to have one and take care of it

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