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In the 1960s and 1970s groups such as the Beatles, the Rolling Stones, the Who, Led Zeppelin and Pink Floyd achieved international success. British groups continue to have enormous appeal to audiences throughout the world and often set new trends in music. Some of the more recent groups include Def Leppard, the Eurythmics, Fine Young Cannibals, the Pet Shop Boys and Wet Wet Wet. Well-known performers include George Michael, David Bowie, Phill Collins, Paul McCartney and Lisa Stansfield.

Some pop groups, in particular the Rolling Stones, did more than just entertain. They wrote words which deliberately intended to shock. They represented the anger and bitterness of youth struggling for freedom against authority, and for this reason they were regarded by some people as the personification of the ‘permissive society’.

The Beatles, on the other hand, finally won the affection – and admiration – of people of all ages and social backgrounds. As they developed, their songs became more serious. They wrote not only of love, but of death and old age and poverty and daily life. They were respected by many intellectuals and by some serious musicians. Largely thanks to the Beatles, pop music has grown into an immense and profitable industry.

在60年代和70年代的樂隊達成國際的成功,像是披頭士樂隊、搖滾隊、the Who、Led Zeppelin 與Pink Floyd。英國的樂隊繼續在世界各處對聽眾有巨大的呼籲並且經常在音樂方面確定新趨勢。一些比較新的樂隊包括Def Leppard, the Eurythmics, Fine Young Cannibals, the Pet Shop Boys and Wet Wet Wet。著名的表演者包括喬治‧麥克,大衛‧鮑伊芳,菲爾‧科林斯,保羅‧麥卡特尼和麗莎‧史丹斯菲爾德。

有些流行樂團,特別是搖滾樂不僅讓人娛樂。因為他們蓄意寫了讓人震驚的話。他們描述為自由鬥爭而對抗權力的年青人的憤怒和辛酸, 也因為這樣,他們被一些人認為是¯縱容社會”的象徵。

另一方面,披頭四最後贏得所有年齡和社會背景的人們的傾愛和讚賞。因為他們成長了,所以他們的音樂變的更嚴肅。他們不僅寫愛,也寫死、老年、貧困和日常生活。他們被許多有知識者和一些嚴肅的音樂家尊重。流行音樂已經發展成為一個巨大和賺錢的工業,這都要非常感謝披頭士。

Update:

不好意思 peichen_shu,我是要看中文的部分,英文版是原稿,所以你弄錯我的意思了

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  • 1 decade ago
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    In the 1960s and 1970s groups such as the Beatles (在50年代和60年代樂團達到國際的肯定)

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  • 1 decade ago

    In the 1960s and 1970s groups such as the Beatles, the Rolling Stones, the Who, Led Zeppelin and Pink Floyd achieved international success. British groups continue to have enormous appeal to audiences throughout the world and often set new trends in music. Some of the more recent groups include Def Leppard, the Eurythmics, Fine Young Cannibals, the Pet Shop Boys and Wet Wet Wet. Well-known performers include George Michael, David Bowie, Phill Collins, Paul McCartney and Lisa Stansfield.

    Some pop groups, in particular the Rolling Stones, did more than just entertain. They wrote words which deliberately intended to shock. They represented the anger and bitterness of youth struggling for freedom against authority, and for this reason they were regarded by some people as the personification of the ‘permissive society’.

    The Beatles, on the other hand, finally won the affection – and admiration – of people of all ages and social backgrounds. As they developed, their songs became more serious. They wrote not only of love, but of death and old age and poverty and daily life. They were respected by many intellectuals and by some serious musicians. Largely thanks to the Beatles, pop music has grown into an immense and profitable industry.

    在60 年代和70 年代小組譬如Beatles, 被帶領的Zeppelin 和桃紅色Floyd 達到國際成功的輾壓石頭, 。英國的小組在世界各地繼續有極大的呼籲對觀眾和經常設置新趨向在音樂。一些最近小組包括Def Leppard, Eurythmics, 罰款年輕食人者, 寵物店男孩並且濕濕Wet. Well-known 執行者包括喬治・邁克爾, 大衛Bowie, Phill Collins, 保□・McCartney 和莉薩・Stansfield 。

    一些流行小組, 特別是輾壓石頭, 做了更多比招待。他們寫了故意地意欲衝擊的詞。他們代表了青年時期的憤怒和冤苦奮鬥為自由反對當局, 並且因此他們由某些人民認為` 許可社會的擬人' 。

    Beatles, 另一方面, 最後贏取了喜愛- 和傾慕- 所有年齡和社會背景的人。當他們顯現了出, 他們的歌曲變得更加嚴肅。他們寫了不僅愛, 但死亡和老年齡和貧窮和日常生活。他們由一些嚴肅的音樂家尊敬由許多知識分子和。大由於Beatles, 流行音樂增長入巨大和有益的產業。

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  • 1 decade ago

    In the 1960s and 1970s, groups such as the Beatles, the Rolling Stones, the Who, Led Zeppelin and Pink Floyd, achieved international success. 中間要加豆點, 不然文法會不通!

    Some examples for the more recent groups include Def Leppard, the Eurythmics, Fine Young Cannibals, the Pet Shop Boys and Wet Wet Wet.

    The rest looks pretty good~

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