哇哈哈 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

幫我看看我寫的公司推薦信英文可以嗎?

請各位英文OK的 幫我看看這樣的推薦信內容可以嗎?謝謝喔!

I am glad to have this opportunity to recommend Ms. Ya-Ting Chou to your esteemed Master of Business Administration program. She was the waitress in the hotel had two years. (在飯店當女服務生已經有兩年了)

She always keeps smiling in the work. According to my observation, she enjoy in the provide service to the customer, and loved see satisfaction smile form customer.

I am glad that she has the opportunity to pursue her interest in the field of Management, she will be an asset to your school.

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    She was the waitress in the hotel had two years.

    可以改成=>She was the waitress and served two-years in the hotel .

    She always keeps smiling in the work. According to my observation, she enjoy in the provide service to the customer, and loved see satisfaction smile form customer.

    這裡你是要表現出你的工作優點,我建議可以這樣打:

    =>According to my observation, her working performance was excellent as she always dynamically served customers and did the best to satisfy their needs. Compared with her colleagues, Ms. Ya-Ting Chou impressed me most favorably.

    這樣可以突顯出你工作上的優點,也可以清楚的說出因為你的表現讓主管印象深刻,否則主管又怎麼可能幫你寫推薦信呢,對吧?

    I am glad 我想這邊可以改成I am pleasured , 因為前面你已經用過glad了,下面再用的話重覆太多. 那整句可以改成這樣:

    =>I am pleasured that she has the opportunity to improve herself in the field of business Management, and I also believe she will be an asset to your school.

    參考一下吧.

    Source(s): 自己
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