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我程度並不好,內容淺顯易懂 我們社會的問題? Obviously,social problems has much to do with the development of a contry. As we all know,enviromental polution is the most serious problem in Taiwan . We\'re aware of polution concern to threaten... show more 我程度並不好,內容淺顯易懂

我們社會的問題?
Obviously,social problems has much to do with the development of a contry.
As we all know,enviromental polution is the most serious problem in Taiwan .
We\'re aware of polution concern to threaten us.Hence, we should be devoted to protecting our home. In me opinion, the best
ways are as follows.
First of all, we should travel by public transit as we could, and Mass
Rapid Transit is the best choice in Taipei. It\'s fast‧cheap and comfortable.
Moreover,recycling and trash classification is so easy for us. In recent year,
the goverment has some policy to be the criterion. Last but not least, we
have to economized on resources any time.
In conclusion, protecting environment is everyone\'s duty. I firmly believe
that as long as everyone do the best for this earth, we will be able to enjoy
new days in the near future.
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Update: In me opinion, the best ways are as follows.
這句我排列有點小問題"第4行"
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