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I don’t know how to say this, but I realized that now is the time to face it.

I have to stop acting like northing happened.

That was me………please forgive me for everything I have done.

I know that I was wrong, and I have taken punishments that I deserved.

This was the biggest mistake in my life, I apologize.

Please do not spread rumors and tell others the truth. (Please, very important for me)

Please do not ask me anything more about this.

I love you guys, please give me a chance.

I sincerely regret for what I have done.

Don’t reply me any word and talk to me cuz I am not ready yet.

I hope that this mail can end my suffering.

Please delete the mail now…..thank you!

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  • Elly
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago
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    I don't know how to say this, but I realized that now is the time to face it.

    I have to stop acting like northing happened.

    That was me………please forgive me for everything I have done.

    I know that I was wrong, and I have taken punishments that I deserved.

    改成: I know that I was wrong, and I have taken the punishments that I deserved.

    理由: "應得的" punishments 為特別指定 "因為該件事而承受的" punishments

    This was the biggest mistake in my life, I apologize.

    改成: This was the biggest mistake I have made in my life, and I apologize.

    理由: 1. 原句的文法沒錯, 但是the biggest mistake語意較不清楚

    2. and 不只連接兩個句子, 而且順承前句的語意

    Please do not spread rumors and tell others the truth.

    改成: Please don't spread the rumors and don't tell others the truth.

    Or Please don't spread the rumors or tell others the truth.

    理由: 1.祁使句的 do not 要縮寫

    2. and 前後的詞性要一致, tell others the truth 前面如果不加 don't 則有 "要" tell others the truth 之嫌

    (Please, very important for me)

    改成: (Please, it is very important for me)

    理由: 基本句子是 ”主詞 + 動詞”, 如果不加 it is, 就沒有主詞和動詞

    Please do not ask me anything more about this.

    改成: Please don't ask me anything more about this.

    理由: 祁使句的 do not 要縮寫

    I love you guys, please give me a chance.

    改成: I love you guys. Please give me a chance.

    理由: 原句的文法沒錯, 但是不夠簡潔有力

    I sincerely regret for what I have done.

    Don't reply me any word and talk to me cuz I am not ready yet.

    改成: Don't reply my mail or talk to me cuz I am not ready yet.

    理由: and前後的詞性要一致(亦卽 肯定句and 肯定句, 否定句and 否定句),

    I hope that this mail can end my suffering.

    Please delete the mail now…..thank you!

    改成: Please delete this mail now. Thank you!

    理由: 1. the 是指”前面提過的特定事物”, 此處用 this 比 the 清楚

    2. 分成兩句比較簡潔

  • 1 decade ago

    I don't know how to say, but I realized that now it is the time to face it.

    I have to stop acting like nothing has happened.

    That was me...... but please forgive me for everything that I have done.

    (加連接詞"but"會比較順一點. 後面的"that I have done"在解釋"everything")

    I understand that I was wrong, and I have taken the punishments that I deserved.

    (跟"know"比較起來,"understand"更誠懇. punishments前面加"the"是因為已經得到"那些"懲罰了)

    That was the biggest mistake of my life, and I apologize.

    (另一種說法: That was the biggesr mistake I made in my life, and I apologize.)

    Please do not spread those rumors anymore, and don't tell the truth. (Please, it is very important to me)

    ("don't tell the truth"意思表達已完整,不需要加"others")

    Please do not ask me anything anymore about it.

    ("anything anymore"...這個...慣用語吧?對不起~不知道該怎麼解釋才好)

    I love you guys, so please give me a chance.

    I sincerely regret what I have done.

    (regret作名詞用法時,後面才接介係詞"for")

    Don't reply my mail and don't talk to me because I am not ready yet!

    I hope this mail will end my suffering.

    Please delete the mail now...thank you!

    Source(s): me plus Yahoo Dictionary
  • 1 decade ago

    第二句: I have to stop facing like nothing HAS happened. 這裡要加個 has, 因為已經發生了.

    第五句: This was the biggest mistake in my life, AND I WANT TO apologize. 或: ... in my life; I WANT TO apologize. 你可以在 life 後面加個 and 來連接這兩句或者用分號, 兩個獨立的句子不可以直接用豆點來連接. 加個 want to 會比較順.

    第六句: Please do not spread THE rumors and tell others the truth (Please, SINCE THIS IS very important to me). 在 spread 和 rumors 中間加個 the 讓看你的信的人知道你指的哪一些謠言, 而這些謠言是之前就有的, 大家都知道的, 所以加個the表示是大家都曉得的. 把句點移到右括號的後面因為括號裡的東西也算是這句的一部分. 然後加個 since this is 在 please 的後面表示"因為這真的(請大家不要散佈謠言跟別人說事實)對我很重要."

    第八句: I love you guys, SO please give me a chance. 因為我喜歡你們大家, 所以請再次給我一個機會. 加個 so 把這兩句的關係連起來.

    第十句: Don't reply THE MAIL TO ME and talk to me cuz I am not ready yet.

    因為你是寫信給他們, 所以你不用他們回信就直接寫 the mail, 不用寫 any word. 給某人要加個 to.

    最後一句: Please delete the mail now...thank you! 中間的符號要注意, 用三點代表你還有講不完的話. 不須要再放兩個句點.

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