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TOPIC:Somepeople prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. Admittedly, there are a lot of advantages of living in a small town, such as its quiet environment and secure life, but I... show more TOPIC:Somepeople prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Admittedly, there are a lot of advantages of living in a small town, such as its quiet environment and secure life, but I personally tend to live in a big city in terms of its convenience at many aspects. The quality of life now plays an important role in life, and I think that the more convenience in life we have, the more quality of live we gain. In big city, it is easy for people to enjoy cutting-edge facilities and enjoy a lot of variety of recreations. Especially the public transportation and the variety and excitements of life.

To begin with, big city people can enjoy the convenient public transportation. Wherever you live nowadays, a convenient public transportation is indispensable for every individual. Big city can meet everyone’s expectation in transportation. Take MRT in Taipei for an example. Commuters in Taipei can gain quick access to MRT and spend less time traveling everywhere. Taking MRT makes it easy for people to save their time and nerve, and MRT improve the traffic congestion in Taipei. Therefore, the people live in a big city can be provided more convenient services.

In addition, big city people can enjoy the variety and excitements of life. As far as food and activities are concerned, there is a lot of variety in Taipei. We can taste all kinds of ethnic food in the center of the city, and there are many night markets satisfying us as well. The variety of food in a big city exactly meets most people’s expectations.

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Update: Likewise, when I mention the activities in a big city, I would say that big city people definitely enjoy more outings than small town people. The workers with sedentary jobs after work could go to theater, KTV, bar and so on.
Update 2: In Taipei, you may have the best and unique choice to go to the 24-hours opened Eslite bookstore. These recreations could ease people’s pressure after their tense work. I think that the outings after work would be most crucial for modern people today.
Update 3: To conclude, while some people will prefer to live in a small town because of its serene atmosphere and environment, I may choose to differ.
Update 4: I believe that living in a big city just like Taipei would benefit a lot, not only enjoy the convenient public transportation, but also enjoy the variety and excitements of life.
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