傻喵
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傻喵 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 2 decades ago

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My Idol

My idol is my father , who I always respect to . He has a comment face , a pear of small eyes , a big nose and the short hair . He has a cute but special symbol – a big fat stomach.

Although he doesn’t have a pretty outside looking . But he has lots of things to made us respect to him . He is honest but serious , brave with the right things but scared of the wrong things , smart and also elegant . He always do his best . And try everything he could .

That’s why we always respect him . He told me lots of things that I have to watch out for . And he always protect me out of dangerous . He also teach me what I can do ,what I can’t do . That’s he feed on me and teach . I’m really appreciated him .I hope one day I grow up I can return back everything I could to him . Because I can’t leave without him.

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    My idol is my father, whom I always have respect for. He has a common face- a pair of small eyes, a big nose, and short hair. His big chubby stomach is a cute symbol of him. Although he does not have a handsome appearance, he has a lot of things that made us respect him. He is honest but serious, courageous of the right things but feared of the wrong things, smart, and elegant. He always do his best and tries everything he could.

    That is why we always respect him. He told me lots of things to be careful of. Also, he always protect me from danger and teach me what I can do and what I can’t do. That is how he feed and teach me. I really appreciates him. I hope one day when I grow up, I can return all the goodness he had given me because I can not live without him.

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