上帝 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 2 decades ago

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How did I spend my winter vacation?

I spend my winter vacation will not interesting and not boring, I’m all right I will play a lot of on-line game and watch TV In this week, In this Saturday will lender calendar’s Happy New Year Eve, I will eat a lot of kind food, candy and chocolate with my cousin and family, at least, my family will expedite a lot of red packet with children, Sunday tomorrow, we will have small game’s. I plan to write the homework of winter vacation in last week. Each for an amazing one is winter vacation very do I think because we always go out to play on winter vacation. The above is rowing on my winter vacation

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  • 2 decades ago
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    How do I spend my winter vacation?

    My winter vacation will not be interesting and not boring(矛盾). I will play a lot of on-line games and watch TV this week. In this Saturday will lender calendar’s Happy New Year Eve, I will eat a lot kinds of food, candies and chocolates with my cousin and family, at least, my family will prepare a lot of red envelopes with children. On Sunday tomorrow, we will have small games. I was planning to do the winter vacation's homework last week.

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    Each for an amazing one is winter vacation very do I think because we always go out to play on winter vacation. The above is rowing on my winter vacation

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  • 2 decades ago

    第三句的watch TV "In"(應該改成小寫),後面'',In this Saturday''直接用''This Saturday''

    第四句",candy and chocolate可以不用寫或改成and a lot junk food,後面直接寫my family

    第五句red packet 可改成 lucky money

    第六句可寫 small games homework 可改成homeworks因為不可能只有一樣功課吧

    Source(s): 要過英檢的自己
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