APPLE asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請高手幫我檢查文法(一小段英文)

這封是要發給客人的休假通知信,請有經驗的大大幫我檢查文法及內容,謝謝!

Please be noted that due to the Chinese New Year vacation is coming,

our office will be closing from Jan.28,2006 to Feb.05,2006.

And the office will be opened on Feb.06,2006.

If there is anything we can do for you, please write us email or contact with us after Feb.06,2006. We will get back to you as soon as we come back from vacations.

Thanks for your cooperation and sorry for causing you inconvenience

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  • Genis
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago
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    Please note that our office will be closed from Jan. 28, 2006 to Feb. 05, 2006 due to the Chinese New Year. Our office will be reopened on Feb. 06, 2006.* 簡單說,公司因為農曆新年假期將在1/28到2/05停止營業就可以了* reopen = 重開If you have any questions regarding to your orders, please either email them to us, or contact us after Feb. 06, 2006. We will get back to you as soon as possible.* 我不曉得您公司是經營些什麼,所以就寫「如果對於您的訂單有任何問題的話,請把那些問題 email 給我們,或者在2/06以後跟我們聯絡」* 第一句也可以改簡單點說:If you need any help from us [如果您需要我們幫忙的話],不過比較口語化Sorry for any inconveniences. Thank you for your attention.* 「感謝您的注意」比「感謝您的合作」好,畢竟是發給客人的信建議:英文寫作簡單扼要就好

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  • Andy H
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    Due to... I heard lots of students use this term, however, please use it wisely. Normally, you only use this when something bad is happening. For example, Due to the storm, our classes were canceled. You may consider using *because of...*

  • jos
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    Due to Chinese New Year public holidays, our office will close from 28th of Jan to 5th of Feb and will reopen on 6th of Feb, 2006. If you would like to contact us, please use email or do so after 6th of Feb. We will get back to you as soon as we can. Thank you for your cooperation and sorry for the inconveniences this has caused. 

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    our office will be closed from January 28th,2006 to Feb 5th, 2006

    and will be opened on Feb. 6th, 2006.

    please write us an email or contact with us after Feb. 6th, 2006.

    we will reply to you as soon as we come back from the vacation.

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  • 1 decade ago

    Due to Chinese New Year, our office will be closed from Jan. 28, 2006 to Feb. 05, 2006, and the office will open again on Feb. 06, 2006.

    If there is anything we can do for you, please write us an email or contact us after Feb.06, 2006. We will get back to you as soon as possible.

    Thanks for your cooperation and sorry for the inconvenience.

    2006-01-17 12:33:44 補充:

    嘿嘿.其他大大說的都有道理..可是英文..你怎麼說怎麼對.. Be confident of yourself and BE YOURSELF.

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