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January nice

The weather was very cold and I have 感冒,崎田 had gone to my home ,he is very 無聊,I gave him English textbook what he don’t think learning, but he 認識 is a girl

The girl teach English very easy

今天天氣很冷而且我又感冒,崎田來到我家,他非常無聊,我給他一本英語課本他不想學,但是他認識一個女生,而這女生教的英語非常簡單。

請各位英語高手幫我修正一下可以嗎@@?我第一次寫作。

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  • 1 decade ago
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    January 9th (我想你是指一月九號吧)

    The weather was really cold today and I also caught a cold. Sakita came to visit my home, and he was very bored. I gave him an Enlgish textbook but he didn't want to learn,however, he knew a girl who taught English easily.

    說時在的...這一篇...就算是中文好像也不太順耶~~~

    希望中文意思可以在順一點這篇英文會翻的更順更有連接性一點喔~~~ :)

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  • 1 decade ago

    The weather today was very cold and I caught a cold, Chi Tian came to my house, he was very bored, I gave him a English textbook but he does not want to learn, but he met a girl, the girl taught him very easy English.

    最後一句怎麽怪怪的??

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  • 1 decade ago

    第一行and he was very bore.有點奇怪!

    這句話的very後面應該接形容詞 bore只能當動詞或名詞

    這句話應該改成被動式:

    and he was very bored. 才對吧?!!

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  • 1 decade ago

    The weather was very cold and I got a cold. Chi Tien cam to my home. He was very bored. I gave him an English textbook but he did not want to learn. He knew a girl who taught very simple English.

    你應該先請中文高手幫你修正一下=_=

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    The weather was very cold today and I also caught a cold. Sakita came visit my home, and he was very bored. I gave an Enlgish book to him while he didn't wonna touch upon it. But he knew a girl who taught easy English.

    2006-01-09 23:28:34 補充:

    回答上面的問題… 打太快了咩… 又不是犯什麼天誅地咩的大錯…

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