pip680620 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

醬寫可以嗎??一句話

People in nowadays suffer from depression as a result of under pressures which is due to work and dealing with social relationship.

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  • Genis
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    1 decade ago
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    People in nowadays suffer from depression as a result of under pressures which is due to work and dealing with social relationship.

    * as a result of under => 不建議連續兩個介系詞一起用

    * pressures which is => 眾數;應該用 are

    * dealing with 可以省略,因為說明人際關係的時候大概也知道是處理這方面的事情

    * 我猜這句的意思是:現在很多人因為工作跟人際關係的壓力而患上憂鬱症

    * 寫得還不錯,不過我覺得可以寫得簡單直接點,可以參考看看:

    - Nowadays, people suffer from depression due to pressures from work and social relationships.

    Source(s): 個人意見
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  • 1 decade ago

    可以寫的更簡潔一點:)

    Nowadays, people suffer from depression caused by heavy pressures of work and social relationship.

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  • 1 decade ago

    umm..

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    People in nowadays suffer from depression as a result of under pressures, which is due to work and dealing with social relationship.

    Source(s): 加拿大的 meeemeee
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