? asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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還有外界過度的渲染恐怕更激盪當事人的心情。

And the over exaggerating of the the external world may cause

the mood of the party concerned to more surge.

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還有外界過度的渲染,這比評家審的話更傷人,恐怕更盪當事人的心情。And the over exaggerating of the exteranl world which is more scathing than the judge's comment. May cause the modd of the party concerned to more surge.

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And the over exaggerating of the exteranl world, which is more scathing than the judge's comment, may cause the mood of the party concerned be come more surge.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    "external world" shouldn't really be use here... "public" is a better word to use...

    And the inflate of the public might just move the party's feelings even more.

    2006-01-06

    what the critic have said, hurts more than the inflate of the public, it might move the party's feeling even more.

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