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Hanna asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫幫我看一下我寫的是否要修改,急需,謝謝!!

虛假與誇張一直是演藝圈中新聞的賣點之一,但是過度誇張或不當的批評,會敗壞社會風氣,造成不良的示範,余天的兒子應該只是情緒低落,但各媒體卻誇張地用「精神失常」、「發瘋」等字眼報導,這比評審的話更傷人,節目要靠此類「藝人出糗」內容吸引觀眾,真是不應該。

It is one of the selling points of the news in performing circles to be false and has been overstating all the time , but overstate improper criticism excessivly , will ruin the social conduct , cause bad demonstration, Yu should only in sons in Tian the depressed,but overstate every media with the ' insane ', ' go mad ',etc. wording report, this hurts one's feeling even more than words that are evaluated, the program should attract audience by this kind of content that ' the actor make a scene ', really it's time .

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  • 1 decade ago
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    My compliment for trying. Here's my version, compare mine and the others', and pick the one you like. If you need additional help, email me.

    Phony and exaggeration have always been the characteristics of the entertainment news; however, over-exaggeration and inappropriate criticism are negative demonstration of journalism that can lead to degrading social morale. For example, in reality, Tu Tian's son was simply experience depression, but media uses words like "crazy" and "mentally distrubed" to describe his condition. Such distasteful comments hurts they victim more than a simple criticism. Furthermore, it is unacceptable to use entertainers' tragedy as advertisement for any TV show.

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  • helen
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    1 decade ago

    演藝圈 show business

    因為是翻譯軟體翻的

    所以看不懂

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