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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文短作.請為我改錯處 !!謝

The role of the story is a tactful kid, his names is Jim. He accident gets the old seaman’s treasure map. Then, Squire Trelawney, Dr Livesey and he go to the Treasure Island to look for the treasure. The evil pirates pretending simple seaman, go together with them. After that, Jim exposes a pirate with one leg who is Silver. Start dangerous look for treasure journey … Finally, Jim also can finish the journey of the Treasure Island, and safely return to England.

我的中文表達是:

故事的主人翁是一個十歲大的機智小孩,He names is Jim。他意外得到the old seaman的藏寶圖。之後他與Squire Trelawney 和Dr Livesey,前往Treasure Island尋寶。心懷不軌的海盜們喬裝成一般的水手,與他們同行出海,後來Jim揭發獨腳海盜Silver的詭計,展開驚險的尋寶之旅…最終,Jim也能完成金銀島探險之旅,一路平安回到英國。

請為我改正英文短作 ...

.... 小弟萬分感謝 !!!!

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  • 1 decade ago
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    The main character of the story is a ten years old witty boy by the name of Jim. He got the old sea man's treasure map by accident. After that he took off to the Treasure Island to find the treasure with Squire Trelawney and Dr Livesey. The evil pirates disguised as sailors and went on the sea trip with them. Later Jim found out the plan of the one legged pirate"Silver", and the adventurous journey starts..... and at last, Jim finally completed the journey to the treasure island, and returned safely back to england.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    The master of the story is a ten-year old boy. He is very tactful. And his name is Jim. He got the old seaman's treasure map by accident. Then, Squire Trelawney, Dr Livesey and he go to the Treasure Island to look for the treasure. And the evil pirates disguise as a sailor in ordinary. They go together with them. After that, Jim expose the one leg pirate Silver's cunning scheme. And then starting the dangerous treasure journey. Finally, Jim finish the journey of the Treasure Island,and go back to England safely.

    Source(s): 自己
  • 1 decade ago

    故事的主人翁是一個十歲大的機智小孩,He names is Jim。

    The main character in this story is a ten-year-old witty boy.

    His name is Jim.

    他意外得到the old seaman的藏寶圖。

    He got the old seaman's treasure map accidentally.

    之後他與Squire Trelawney 和Dr Livesey,前往Treasure Island尋寶。

    Later on, Squire Trelawney, Dr. Livesey, and he go to the Treasure Island to find

    the treasure.

    心懷不軌的海盜們喬裝成一般的水手,與他們同行出海,

    The malevolent pirates dressed up as common sailors, and went sailing with them.

    後來Jim揭發獨腳海盜Silver的詭計,展開驚險的尋寶之旅…

    And then, Jim disclosed one-legged pirate silver's trickery, and they started a

    hairraising journey about finding the treasure.

    最終,Jim也能完成金銀島探險之旅,一路平安回到英國。

    Finally, Jim finished the journey at the Treasure Island, and went back to

    England safely.

    Source(s): 自己^^
  • Andy H
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    1 decade ago

    This is a story about an intelligent boy whose name is Jim. By chance, he got the old seaman’s treasure map. Together with Squire Trelawney, and Dr Livesey they left for the Treasure Island to look for the treasure. The evil pirates pretended to be ordinary seamen and went on with them. Soon, Jim had discovered the scandal by finding out one of them had only one leg who's known as the "Silver"; and began a dangerous, yet a interesting journey. At the end, Jim completed the mission to the treasure Island and safely returned to his country, England.

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