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According to the mom's this section of speeches, it derived from our life is can be created, but life also has some parts cannot be changed by us. It's like why is Gump's mother would be Gump's mother, not be others? And why is Gump a retarded boy by birth, not be like other normal people? No one can answer these questions and no one can explain these reasons. We just can say it's destined and god make an arrangement.

Changed the destiny

Although our fate (destiny) is doomed of god, we still can change it. We can remedy our defect if we were great effort enough. For example: The famous musician-- Kevin Kern who was blind by birth, and he has to rely on the sense of touch and feeling to know the world. He also has to learn music theory by Braille and search for the keys by feeling. He supports stern hinder and strike when he learns. He finally becomes a famous musician after a hard temper. He ever said, "trust yourself and the trust is existence of boundless". He not only achieves his dream but also bring this dream to everyone.

Have hopes

From this classical speech we can know, there are limitless colors and hopes full of the life. If people have hopes, it will be more sanguine about living manner and to be finding out solve ways when it had troubles, it also to do something won't give up. We can discover people have more confidence and constructive than other. We don't know what will be happening or meeting somebody in the future and maybe there is the most hope of the future, it will be next today. People often shut hopes in the box, if we don't open it, we won't see hope in the future. However, hope is the source of power.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    According to the mom's this section of speeches, it derived from our life is can be created, but life also has some parts cannot be changed by us.  It's like why is Gump ' s mother would be Gump's mother, not be others?  And why is Gump a retarded boy by birth, not be like other normal people?  No one can answer these questions and no one can explain these reasons.  We just can say it's destined and god make an arrangement.  Changed the destiny  Although our fate (destiny)  Is doomed of god, we still can change it.  We can remedy our defect if we were great effort enough.  For example: The famous musician -- Kevin Kern who was blind by birth, and he has to rely on the sense of touch and feeling to know the world.  He also has to learn music theory by Braille and search for the keys by feeling.  He supports stern hinder and strike when he learns.  He finally becomes a famous musician after a hard temper.  He ever said, " trust yourself and the trust is existence of boundless" .  He not only achieves his dream but also bring this dream to everyone.  Have hopes From this classical speech we can know, there are limitless colors and hopes full of the life.  If people have hopes, it will be more sanguine about living manner and to be finding out solve ways when it had troubles, it also to do something won't give up.  We can discover people have more confidence and constructive than other.  We don't know what will be happening or meeting somebody in the future and maybe there is the most ho Pe of the future, it will be next today.  People often shut hopes in the box, if we don ' t open it, we won ' t see hope in the future.  However, hope is the source of power.  

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    兩位作家的第一句文法明顯大大的錯2掉了, 看不下去, 這樣也要選嗎

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  • 1 decade ago

    According to the mom's this section of speeches, it derived from our life can be created, but life also have some parts that couldn’t be changed by us. It's like why Gump’s mother would be Gump's mother, not others? And why is Gump a retarded boy by birth, unlike normal people? No one can answer these questions and no one can explain these reasons. We can just say that it's destined and god makes the arrangement.

    Changing the destiny

    although our fate (destiny) is doomed by god, we can still change it. We can remedy our defect if we had made enough effort. For example: The famous musician -- Kevin Kern who was blind on birth, and he has to rely on the sense of touch and feeling to know the world. He also has to learn music theory by Braille and search for the keys by feeling it. He supports stern hinder and strike when he learns. He finally became a famous musician after a hard temper. He always say, “Trust yourself and the trust is existence of boundless”. He not only achieved his dream but also brought this dream to everyone.

    Have hopes

    from this classical speech we can know, there are limitless colors and hopes fill in our lives. If people have hopes, it will be more sanguine about living manner and to find out solutions to problems, it also to do with not giving up. We will discover that people will have more confidence and more constructive than others. We don't know what will happen or who we will meet in the future and maybe there are lots of hopes in the future, it may be the next day. People often shut their hopes in a box, if we don’t open it, we won’t see hope for the future. However, hope is the source of power.

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