這幾句英文的文法這樣OK嗎

Question

After 2 week I fixed all kind of troubles,

Just to install the software of GIS.

And now the install is OK,

but I`m already forget how to use the GIS software.

It`s one and a half years since I learned.

That`s a big trouble in my topic discussion.

GOD! Save me!

(GOD:Hey!Go back to work!You lazy boy.)

Answer 1

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After 2 weeks I fixed all kinds of troubles,(week kind是可屬名詞 所以要加"s")

Just installing the software of GIS.(當主詞與前一句相同時 可以省略並將動詞改為動名詞)

And now the installation is OK,(install是動詞 所以要用名詞形式installation )

but I've already forgot(forgotten) how to use the GIS software.(句意應該是我已經忘記 所以要用完成式)

It has been one and a half years since I learned.(since前面要用完成式 因為它是表示從過去到現在的一段時間 since後面用過去式 因為它是表示從過去的那個點)

That`s a big trouble in my topic discussion.

GOD! Save me!

(GOD:Hey!Go back to work!You lazy boy.)

Source(s): 我自己

Answer 2

week是可數名詞 所以 2 week 要加s 變成 2 weeks

just 是可以當形容詞或副詞 但不可當動詞用

所以 just to install 要變成 just install

install 是動詞 不須加 the 且動詞和動詞不可放在一起

所以 the install is 要改成 install OK

am 和 forget 都是動詞 already 是副詞

所以 I`m already forget 要改成 I already forget

整篇文章要變成:

After 2 weeks I fixed all kind of troubles,

just install the software of GIS.

And now install OK,

but I already forget how to use the GIS software.

It`s one and a half years since Ilearned.

That`s a big trouble in my topic discussion.

GOD! Save me!

(GOD:Hey!Go back to work!You lazy boy.)

我不確定我有沒有改錯!

如有錯誤 請多多包涵!!

Source(s): 自己