Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

幫修改我的爛英文文法。20點 是一首POEM




Hershey's Kisses,

It is sweet,

It is hard,

but smooth.

You could feel your body as light as feathers,

You could fly on the sky,

with hershey's kisses.




3 Answers

  • 1 decade ago
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    幫你改寫如下,有押韻Hershey's Kisses,It is so sweet,as sweet as your honey.It looks hard but melts easily as you tenderly touch it. it slides down into you heart smoothly,once you have it ,the feather-like flying object is your bodyfloating in the sky lightly,with hershey's kisses, surely you could do it. 

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I think RockerDoll's work is way much better~

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  • 1 decade ago

    This is another piece of my poetic work that rhymes(押韻) quite nicely. From me, to you, for free :-)

    Take one Hershey's kiss,

    Taste its sweet heavenly bliss.

    It may resemble a small piece of solid mud,

    Yet it can rock every one of your taste bud.

    You feel feather-light,

    You're up high as a kite.

    Your wings are spread wide,

    Let Hershey's kisses be your guide.

    2005-12-09 16:24:01 補充:

    I cannot believe you chose that one by OG Sean over mine. Do you have any idea what a poem is? That did NOT sound like a poem at all...


    Source(s): my pretty little head
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