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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我修正一下我的[英文演講稿](20點)

請幫我個忙,我要在課堂上做一個2-3分鐘的英文演講,佔很重的分數...

稿子我已經寫好了,大約有兩分鍾半,但是我很不確定內容這樣到底可不可以?還有文法!請各位幫我吧~多謝~~順便給我的演講內容一點建議~~~

Good afternoon, today I am going to introduce one of Roald Dahl’s famous books, called” Charlie and the Great Glass Elevator” which was the story happening after “Charlie and the Chocolate Factory”.

Starting from the end of” Charlie and the Chocolate Factory”, while Mr. Wonka, Charlie, Charlie’s parents and grandparents rode in the Great Glass Elevator and were supposed to go back to the factory, the Glass Elevator flew into outer space and went into orbit around the Earth instead. They visited the world’s first Space Hotel, while all the people down on Earth, including the president of United States and the people on the other ship in space thought they were dangerous aliens trying to blow up the Space Hotel with a bed-shaped bomb. However, there really were aliens in the Space Hotel—greenish-brown and egg shaped “ Vermicious Knids”, which were a kind of space alien than can change into any shape, they travel through space in big groups, destroys everything they see on other planets, and they ate the living beings that used to live on the Moon as well as Mars and Venus too.

The eight people in the glass Elevator were in grave danger, luckily Mr. Wonka and Charlie used their wisdom to save themselves as well as the space ship with 136 people on it by going back to Earth. The aliens followed them, but they couldn’t stand the heat when they rushed through the atmosphere at high speed, so they all became shooting stars.

After they landed in the chocolate factory again, Mr. Wonka tried to convince Charlie’s three grandparents to get out of the bed that they have been staying in for twenty years. As for what happened next and the real ending of the story, you can find out yourself if you are interested. This book is available in Taipei Public Library.

Update:

拜託~我沒有請你翻譯啊!

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Good afternoon. Today I am going to introduce one of Roald Dahl’s famous books called” Charlie and the Great Glass Elevator” which is a sequel of“Charlie and the Chocolate Factory”.

    Starting from the end of” Charlie and the Chocolate Factory”, Mr. Wonka, Charlie, Charlie’s parents and grandparents rode in the Great Glass Elevator and were supposed to go back to the factory, but the Glass Elevator flew into outer space and orbited around the Earth instead. They visited the world’s first Space Hotel. All the people down on earth, including the president of the United States and the people on the other spaceship thought they were dangerous aliens trying to blow up the Space Hotel with a bed-shaped bomb. However, there really were aliens in the Space Hotel, greenish-brown and egg shaped “ Vermicious Knids”, which was a kind of space alien that could change into any shape. They traveled through space in big groups, destroyed everything they saw on other planets, and they ate the living beings that used to live on the Moon as well as Mars and Venus.

    The eight people in the glass elevator were in grave danger. Luckily, Mr. Wonka and Charlie used their wisdom to save themselves as well as the 136 people on the spaceship. They returned safely back to earth. Even though they were followed by the aliens, the aliens couldn’t stand the heat when they rushed through the atmosphere at high speed, so they all became shooting stars.

    After they landed in the chocolate factory again, Mr. Wonka tried to convince Charlie’s three grandparents to get out of the bed that they have been staying in for twenty years. As for what happened next and the real ending of the story, you can find out yourself if you are interested. This book is available in the Taipei Public Library.

    時態一致會比較好。有些句子太長了,要給自己喘息的時間。可以把書中的精華講出來,並加入自己的評語之類的。加油!

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  • 1 decade ago

    它ㄉ中文是

    下午好, 今天我將要介紹Roald Dahl s 著名的書之一, called〃查理和是在‥Charlie 和巧克力Factory〃之后發生的故事的大的玻璃杯Elevator〃。

    從結局of〃查理和巧克力Factory〃開始, 當Wonka先生,查理,Charlie s 父母和祖父母乘坐大的玻璃升降機並且應該回到工廠時, 玻璃升降機飛入外太空並且改為在地球周遭去軌道。 他們首先訪問world s 空間飯店, 全部時人們在地球上擊落, 在認為的在太空裡的其它船上包括美國的總統和人們 他們是努力用一枚床形成的炸彈炸掉空間飯店的危險的外國人。 但是, 在飯店Xgreenish 空間棕色內真的有外國人,蛋形成‥Vermicious Knids〃, 是一種空間外國人比能變成任何形狀, 他們環球旅行在大組內,破壞他們在其他行星上看見的所有東西, 並且他們吃過去常常也在衛星以及火星和金星上生活的生物。

    在玻璃升降機裡的8 人在嚴重的危險裡, 幸運的是,先生Wonka 和查理使用他們智慧救他們自己以及太空船與136 人一起在上以追溯到地球。 那些外國人跟隨他們,但是他們當他們以高速匆忙處理大氣時,couldn t 忍受熱,因此他們全部成為流星。

    在他們再次在巧克力工廠登陸之后, Wonka先生努力說服Charlie s 3 祖父母擺脫他們一直呆在家裡20 年的床。 至於發生下一和非常故事的結束,如果你感興趣,你能查明自己。 這本書在台北公共圖書館有貨。

    應該沒錯

    Source(s): 我和翻譯軟體
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