Anonymous
Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

這樣的英文作文有沒有錯?

It is believed that a lot of people have thought of this question, what do I want to do in the future?

Certainly I am no exception.

Just after a few years, I think in one orchestra of the group,

Once a poisonous rock concert instead that I had gone with a friend,

I have seen orchestra that I love most now -RoseDin,

Their efforts on the platform sing, vigor that there should be at a rock concert of ours that the certain too janitor gives,

In the concert , deep to fascinated they have I have

Hope very much that oneself is like them,

It is not still that a lot of people know them at present,

But believe that they are here equally They in the future advance,

Thinking of here me is very excited ,

Have studied the guitar after playing the friend.

I have already studied for several months until today,

Very happy to walk to the goal that I think trully too by oneself,

I had this heart and wanted group's orchestra strongly ,

Adhere to the idea sure to succeed one day too.

如果有錯誤麻煩糾正....謝謝..

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  • 1 decade ago
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    It is believed that a lot of people have thought of this question,

    what do I want to do in the future?

    Certainly have no exception

    Just after a few years, I think the set a band,

    Once a poisonous rock concert instead that I had gone with a friend,

    I have seen a band that I love most now -RoseDin,

    Their efforts on the platform sing,

    vigor that there should be at a rock concert of ours that the certain too janitor gives,

    In the concert , deep to fascinated they have I have

    Hope very much that oneself is like them,

    It is not still that a lot of people know them at present,

    But believe that they are here equally They in the future advance,

    When I think of it, I get excited.

    Have studied the guitar after playing with a friend.

    I had this heart and wanted group's orchestra strongly ,

    and wish for it to succeed on day.

    這樣才對吧哈哈@@

  • Linda
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    I do not know what you try to say; but as far as I can see, it has lots of mistakes.

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