Anonymous
Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 2 decades ago

請大大幫我看一下文法是不是有寫錯

This is my first time for mountain climbing.

Oooh! What a exciting day!

Our goal is the Li Ding mountain.

Start off about 7 am.

(Hey!I wake up at 5:30! the sun not even rise.)

We take the Jain Li line and down to the Li Ding mountain.

Carzy line!

Hey! This is my first day! I'm a freshman!

I`m wondering why I accept the most tough line!?

The gradient is about 45 degree. Up and Down!

I`m wear a flat-soled shoe! Silly boy.

The dew make the road slippery.

Well! I`m gather 5 slip and fall.

It can make a qualification to exchange a jelly.

Update:

請幫我大概檢查一下就好了!謝謝!^^

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  • Anonymous
    2 decades ago
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    *Today would be* my first time *to do* mountain climing.

    Ooh! What *an* exciting day!

    Our goal today was *to clime* the Li Ding mountain.

    *It started* off about 7 am.

    (Hey! I *woke* up at 5:30! *Before the sun rose*.)

    We *took* the Jain Li line and down to the Li Ding mountain.

    *It was a* carzy line!

    Hey! *Today was just* my first day! I *was like* a freshman!

    I`m wondering why I *would* accept the *toughest* line!?

    The gradient is about 45 degree. Up and Down!

    I *was wearing* a *pair of* flat-soled *shoes*! Silly.

    The dew *had made* the road slippery.

    Well! I *would* gather 5 slip and fall.

    It *could* make a *certificate for exchanging* a jelly.

    Source(s): 主詞, 介繫詞, 動詞,要明確就可以做的更好
  • Anonymous
    2 decades ago

    This is my first time for mountain climbing. ==> was

    Oooh! What a exciting day! ==> an

    Our goal is the Li Ding mountain. ==> was

    Start off about 7 am.==> started

    (Hey!I wake up at 5:30! the sun not even rise.)==> woke up, the sun 'was'

    We take the Jain Li line and down to the Li Ding mountain.==> took

    Carzy line!

    Hey! This is my first day! I'm a freshman!

    I`m wondering why I accept the most tough line!?

    The gradient is about 45 degree. Up and Down!

    I`m wear a flat-soled shoe! Silly boy.

    The dew make the road slippery.

    Well! I`m gather 5 slip and fall.

    It can make a qualification to exchange a jelly.

    ==> 動詞應該是 past tense

    Source(s): my personal opinion
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