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Bobo asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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If you visit to St. Louis, you must go to “St. Louis Gateway Arch”. By the sixties, St. Louis had flashing buildings. The "St. Louis Gateway Arch" enjoying great prestige in the world. This large arched door is 192 meters high. A long time ago, people generally thought that St. Louis was the door to west. Its designer Saarinen is immigrating American Finns in 1923. His idea originated in 1947, but the arched door was not finished by October 28, 1965, it all cost 13 million dollars. It's a pity, because Saarinen has not waited cutting the ribbon. He was died by brain tumor in 1961. Today, the arched door is the landmark building of U.S.A., it is higher than the monument of Washington. The normal range of swing of the top of arched door can be within 46 centimeters. But calculate according to the scientist, even it meets strong wind at 80 kilometers per hour, but it has 5 centimeters only to swing the range. Because the whole arched door is built up of stainless steel, so it will suffer the attack of the thunder and lightning several hundred times every year. This has created supreme record hit by the lightning in building. Because there is very advanced avoiding the lightning system in the arched door, so there are not any damage or the casualties. That can receive 6400 visitors every day in this large arched door. Taking the elevator, visitors can reach the top in 4 minutes. If visitors climb along the stairs, they need to climb 1076 steps. The wide of arched door tops more than two meters and each side has 16 small windows. When weather is fine, visitors can see the panorama of St. Louis and Illinois outside 48 kilometers. It’s wonderful for you can see a whole sight when you travel in the new place. These reasons let me think that should go to St. Louis Gateway Arch, if you reach St. Louis.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    拜託,樓上的,你好歹也改個幾個字吧,如果你真的會英文的話^^"

    If you ever go to St. Louis, you should visit St. Louis Gateway Arch which was a great new stunning architecture that was built in the sixties. The St. Louis Gateway Arch earns great prestige in the world. A long time ago, people generally believed that St. Louis was the door to the west. Its designer Saarinen was a Finnish who immigrated to US in 1923. His idea originated in 1947, but the arched door was not finished until October 28, 1965. It had cost 13 million dollars. It's a great pity that Saarinen did not see it finished. He died from a brain tumor in 1961. Today, the arched gate is one of the landmarks in U.S.A. The Gateway Arch of St. Louis is 192 meters tall which is taller than the monument of Washington. The average range of swing on the top of arched gates are around 46 centimeters. But according to the scientist, even when the Gateway Arch of St louis meets strong winds like 80 kilometers per hour, it has only the range of 5 centimeters to swing. The whole arched gate was built by stainless steel, so it can survive from the thunder and lightning strikes several hundred times every year, which was a supreme record. There is a very advanced lightning conducting system on the arched gate, so there were not any damage or casualties. It can hold 6400 visitors every day. By taking the elevator, visitors can reach the top in 4 minutes. If visitors climb along the stairs, they need to climb 1076 steps. The top of arched door is wide more than two meters and each side has 16 small windows. In the good sunny days, visitors can see the whole view of St. Louis and some part of Illinois. It's a wonderful way for you to see the whole sight when you travel to St Louis. Those are the reason I think the Gateway Arch of St. Louis is a must-go if you ever visit St. Louis.

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    If you visit to St. Louis, you must go to “St. Louis Gateway Arch”. By the sixties, St. Louis had flashing buildings. The "St. Louis Gateway Arch" enjoying great prestige in the world. This large arched door is 192 meters high. A long time ago, people generally thought that St. Louis was the door to west. Its designer Saarinen is immigrating American Finns in 1923. His idea originated in 1947, but the arched door was not finished by October 28, 1965, it all cost 13 million dollars. It's a pity, because Saarinen has not waited cutting the ribbon. He was died by brain tumor in 1961. Today, the arched door is the landmark building of U.S.A.; it is higher than the monument of Washington. The normal range of swing of the top of arched door can be within 46 centimeters. But calculate according to the scientist, even it meets strong wind at 80 kilometers per hour, but it has 5 centimeters only to swing the range. Because the whole arched door is built up of stainless steel, so it will suffer the attack of the thunder and lightning several hundred times every year. This has created supreme record hit by the lightning in building. Because there is very advanced avoiding the lightning system in the arched door, so there are not any damage or the casualties. That can receive 6400 visitors every day in this large arched door. Taking the elevator, visitors can reach the top in 4 minutes. If visitors climb along the stairs, they need to climb 1076 steps. The wide of arched door tops more than two meters and each side has 16 small windows. When weather is fine, visitors can see the panorama of St. Louis and Illinois outside 48 kilometers. It’s wonderful for you can see a whole sight when you travel in the new place. These reasons let me think that should go to St. Louis Gateway Arch, if you reach St. Louis.

    基本上沒啥錯誤拉~~~做ㄉ很好!!!

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