請幫我檢查內容是否有誤。

They have a jurney again. This time Mr.Fogg buy a ship, so they can go to the port of the would everyplace and don`t need to catch the train or ship.

They journey to some same place and some different place.Bombay is the one of the same place.This time they visit many temple and Passepartout don`t wear his shoes into the temple.

In the jurney,Mrs.Fogg,Aouda, give birth to a fine healthy baby.Mr.Fogg is very happy and named the baby "Jurney". But Passepartout think that it fit for the baby and it feel very funny.

主要角色有Mr. 和 Mrs.Fogg 還有Passepartout,

起專家幫忙看看有沒有錯誤的地方,

或是有更好的說法和單字,

麻煩大家了。

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    2 decades ago
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    They have a journey again. However this time, Mr.Fogg buy a ship so that they can go to any ports in the would and do not need to worried about catching the train or ship.

    They travel a lot of places, some they've went before, some are new places they have never been.Bombay is one of the places they had been to in the earlier time.This time they visit many temples, and Passepartout remember to take off his shoes when they just about getting into the temple.

    During the journey, Mrs.Fogg, Aouda, gives birth to a quite healthy baby.Mr.Fogg is so happy and named the baby as "Jurney".Passepartout thinks that name fits the baby pretty well, and he feels that the whole story is really funny.

    有些地方不是很清楚你的想法

    所以擅自做了更動

    希望這樣改還可以接受

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