幫我看一下文章.15點!2段

1. Zoe is a emulous girl. She is good at printing but she isn’t good at studying. She wants her study can be best, so she always sits in front of the desk to read the context book and gives up her favorite hobby, printing. Even if she is studying everyday, her study is still not good. Her parents are businessman... show more 1.
Zoe is a emulous girl. She is good at printing but she isn’t good at studying. She wants her study can be best, so she always sits in front of the desk to read the context book and gives up her favorite hobby, printing. Even if she is studying everyday, her study is still not good. Her parents are businessman and they often go to other countries to trade. Zoe’s parents can’t often along with her, they love each other.

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Unfortunately, a terrible thing had happened. Zoe’s parents had a crackup of an airplane. Zoe is so sad that she stop reading the book, she starts sing sorrowful songs everyday to memorize her parents. Today, she sings a song like before. Suddenly, the door bell is ringing, a headless man comes in and he leaves a cap. After the headless man leaves, Zoe wears the cap, and than, an amazed thing happen. Zoe can see and communicate with the ghosts. So, she starts finding her parents.

幫我看一下哪裡不通順..或者哪裡不懂(因為有些句子是我自己"創造"翻的)..還...
Update: 我不是要翻譯..這就是我自己寫的阿....
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