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英文劇本翻譯挑錯-特急-[贈20點]

相信大家都有看過國王的新衣這個故事吧

麻煩各位大大幫忙挑錯囉!或是有什麼可以改的句子或詞

國王:我是最帥氣的國王,整個ABC大學的學生為我瘋狂!哇!冬天到了,好冷,我需要一件跟我臉蛋搭配的大衣

I am the handsomest king , all the students in ABC university are crazy for me! Wow! Winter is coming and I feel cold, I need an overcoat which can collocate with my face

   快命令學校裡的裁縫師去做一件大衣!

Command the tailor in the university to make an overcoat!

大臣:是的,國王。國王需要一件帥氣的大衣,還不快做

Yes, my monarch. Our monarch need a beautiful overcoat and hurry up!

宮裁A:我們會用皮草做出保暖的大衣

We will make a overcoat which can keep warm by skin.

宮裁B:放心交給我們吧!

You can set your mind at ease!

宮裁A:哈哈,終於完成了

Haha, it was done

宮裁B:實在是太完美了,趕快獻給國王

It is really perfect, let's offer to the king quickly.

宮裁AB:國王,這是我們為您做的新大衣

Sir, it is the new overcoat we made for you

國王:快點…

Hurry up....

宮裁AB:太帥了~

It's so wonderful~

國王:這跟我的臉不搭,拖出去斬了!

The overcoat is not collocate with my face, you will die!

宮裁AB:啊~

ahh~~

大臣:請國王息怒,我會幫國王在找一位高手的

Please don't be angry, I will search a expert for you

兩光:請給我三天的時間,我會做出世界上最創新的衣服

Give me three days please, I will make the newest clothing in the world

大臣:你在縫什麼?為什麼我看不到你縫的衣服?

What are you doing now? Why can't I see you stich the clothing?

兩光:這是只有帥哥才看得到的,相信國王一定看得到

The clothing is just be seen from a handsome man, I believe that the king will see it.

國王:進度如何?

What's the rate of progress

大臣:非常的好

Very well.

兩光:國王我做好了,這是只有帥的人才能看到的衣服

My monarch, I was done, this is the clothing which could be seen by a handsome man.

國王:喔~我看到了,快來人幫我換上

Oh~I saw it, help me to wear it !

   我要給全ABC大學的人看!

I will show to all the people in ABC university!

路人:哇~多麼帥氣的國王啊

oh~How a handsome king he is!

小孩:哈哈~國王沒穿衣服耶

haha~the king doesn't wear anythin

他爹:閉嘴!

Shut up!

小孩:可是…是真的沒穿呀

He really doesn't wear anything!

國王:喔~不~

Oh~no~

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    國王:我是最帥氣的國王,整個ABC大學的學生為我瘋狂!哇!冬天到了,好冷,我需要一件跟我臉蛋搭配的大衣

    我會寫:

    I am the most handsome king. All the students in ABC university are crazy about me! Oh! Winter is here, and I'm cold! I need a new coat that goes with my handsome face!

       快命令學校裡的裁縫師去做一件大衣!

    我會說:Order the university tailor to make me a new coat!

    大臣:是的,國王。國王需要一件帥氣的大衣,還不快做

    我會說:Yes, your majesty. Our majesty needs a gorgeous new coat! Hurry up and get to work!

    宮裁A:我們會用皮草做出保暖的大衣

    我會說:We will make a new coat that will keep you warm.

    宮裁B:放心交給我們吧!

    我會說:We'll take care of it!

    宮裁A:哈哈,終於完成了

    我會說:And it's done!

    宮裁B:實在是太完美了,趕快獻給國王

    我會說:That's just perfect! Let's go show it to the king!

    宮裁AB:國王,這是我們為您做的新大衣

    我會說:Your majesty, this is your new coat.

    國王:快點…

    Hurry up....

    宮裁AB:太帥了~

    我會說:That's gorgeous!

    國王:這跟我的臉不搭,拖出去斬了!

    我會說:This coat doesn't go with my face! Off with your head!

    宮裁AB:啊~

    ahh~~

    大臣:請國王息怒,我會幫國王在找一位高手的

    我會說:Your majesty, please calm down. I will search for a new tailor for you!

    兩光:請給我三天的時間,我會做出世界上最創新的衣服

    我會說:Give me three days, and I will make you the most original clothing in the world!

    大臣:你在縫什麼?為什麼我看不到你縫的衣服?

    我會說:What are you sewing now? Why can't I see anything?

    兩光:這是只有帥哥才看得到的,相信國王一定看得到

    我會說:This can only be seen by handsome people. I believe the king will be able to see it!

    國王:進度如何?

    我會說:How is the progress?

    大臣:非常的好

    Very well.

    兩光:國王我做好了,這是只有帥的人才能看到的衣服

    我會說:Your majesty, I have finished. This clothing can only be seen by handsome men.

    國王:喔~我看到了,快來人幫我換上

    我會說:Oh! I see it! Put this on for me!

       我要給全ABC大學的人看!

    I will show to all the people in ABC university!

    路人:哇~多麼帥氣的國王啊

    我會說:What a handsome king he is!

    小孩:哈哈~國王沒穿衣服耶

    我會說:The king isn't wearing anything! Haha!

    他爹:閉嘴!

    我會說:Be quiet!

    小孩:可是…是真的沒穿呀

    我會說:But he really isn't wearing anything!

    國王:喔~不~

    Oh~no~

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