夢露 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文!! 幫我看文法有沒有錯!有錯並修改*20點*

hello every teacher and student!

i am XXX from applied english.

On this hollwin i am impersonating Cinderella.

i'm not just wanna be as pretty as her,

instead i wish i can be more like her personality,

not afraid of the diffculty,

and believe in the hope on life,

i think that how life should be.

Today i won't trick,

i'm going to be dignified.

So please vote for me,

it will be the most wise decision of your life.

thanks.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    hello every teacher and student!i am XXX from Department of Applied English.On this hollwin(這是什麼?是拼錯嗎?你是要寫Halloween嗎 ?) i am impersonating Cinderella.i'm not (把'm not拿掉,改成don't不然會有兩個動詞)just wanna be as pretty as her,instead i wish i can be more like her personality,which are not being afraid of the difficulty(你又拼錯字了),and believing in the hope on life,i think that how life should be.(這句話很怪哦!你想講什麼?)Today i won't trick,i'm going to be dignified. (你是想說:我想成為高尚的人嗎?這一句話和上一句話"I won't trick"有什麼關系呢?)So please vote for me,it will be the most wise (wise的最高級是wisest)decision of your life.thanks. btw如果你真的是外語人…真的要加強了…不要說我太mean....that's true...

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  • 1 decade ago

    整個幫你重寫吧──這樣比較快(我急需點數):

    Hello teachers and fellow students,

    I am XXX from the Department of Applied English.

    This Halloween, I am dressing up as Cinderella.

    It's not just her beauty that I admire,

    I also admire her personality.

    I think it's great how she is not afraid of difficulty,

    and how she never gives up hope.

    I believe that is how we should live our lives.

    You won't see any trickery from me,

    I'm going to be dignified.

    So please vote for me,

    it will be the wisest decision of your life.

    Thank you.

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  • 1 decade ago

    i think that how life should be.

    他應該是要講I think that that's how life should be.

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