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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 2 decades ago

誰可以幫我看一下文法~~~

如果哪裡有錯可否幫我修正一下

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1.To enclose a $5315 check with the envelope to pay our down payment, in the case of the part of remainder, we will clear off before the end of April.

2.The conditions of the trade in the credit letter are mistaken, please revise it as quickly as possible and send words to the banks and the outlets.

3.Your company hasn’t given us the payment on time frequently, and it’s already making our finance in a difficult position.

4.Your company’s payment has already overdue for three month; we expect you can disburse it as quickly as possible, because the profit margin is very small.

這些都是已經照中文翻譯過來了

只是需要麻煩幫忙看一下文法和用字的正確性

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    1.To enclose a $5315 check with the envelope to pay our down payment, in the case of the part of remainder, we will clear off before the end of April.

    1A.Enclosed please find a envelop that include a check with the amount of $5315,

    For our down payment, as for the part of remainder, We will pay it off before the end of April.

    2A.The conditions of the trade in the credit letter are mistaken, please revise it as quickly as possible and send words to the banks and the outlets.

    2. The conditions of the trade in the credit letter(litter of credit/信用狀?)are incorrect,

    please revise it as quickly as possible and send letter the banks and the outlets.

    3.Your company hasn’t given us the payment on time frequently, and it’s already making our finance in a difficult position.

    3A. Since your company did not make payment on time and it’s already making our finance in a difficult situation.

    4.Your company’s payment has already overdue for three month; we expect you can disburse it as quickly as possible, because the profit margin is very small

    4A. Your company’s payment has already overdue for three month, since because the profit margin is very small, we expect you to disburse it as quickly as possible.

    Source(s): myself
  • 2 decades ago

    1.To enclose a $5315 check with the envelope to pay our down payment, in the case of the part of remainder, we will clear off before the end of April.

    Enclosed in the envelope is a $5315 check which is to pay our down payment. In the case of the remainder part, we will clear it off before the end of April.

    2.The conditions of the trade in the credit letter are mistaken. (這邊用句號把兩句分開會比較好一點) Please revise it as quickly as possible and send words to the banks and the outlets.

    3.Your company hasn’t given us the payment on time frequently, and it’s already making our finance in a difficult position.

    Your company has been not giving us the payment on time frequently and it has already put our finance into a difficult position. (正式或商業英文要避免縮寫 hasn't= has not)

    4.Your company’s payment has already overdue for three month; we expect you can disburse it as quickly as possible, because the profit margin is very small.

    Your company's parment has been overdue for three month alreadyl. We expect you to disburse it as quickly as possible because the profit margin is very small.

    Source(s): 個人意見
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