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請幫我看一下,下面的文章句子有沒有問題,如果有錯請大大們幫我修改一下Making friend is a very happy matter, I like to make friend very much, the advantage that make friend is a lot of, you can learn the advantage from their body, can also see the weakness cite as lessons to be learned, loving, anger, sadness, and happiness someone shares with you, so... show more 請幫我看一下,下面的文章句子有沒有問題,如果有錯請大大們幫我修改一下Making friend is a very happy matter, I like to make friend very much, the advantage that make friend is a lot of, you can learn the advantage from their body, can also see the weakness cite as lessons to be learned, loving, anger, sadness, and happiness someone shares with you, so you know nothing about the loneliness, the point is you to never know when you will need their helpIf we just wait for someone passively to know, so we the friend who can know would be few a lot of, so know the friend is very important actively! Say "hello" with person actively, active with person's confabulation, help the other people actively, they will amaze very much your probably active, but would be very happy you do so!The name that remembers the other people is also very important! If we hope to be remembered, so we should remember the name of the others first, that will give the person a feeling that is respected, naturally of will like to become intimate with you! Active with remember the name of the others, is the way that I make friend, share with you!
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