Making friend is a very happy matter, (連接兩個句子~中間最好接連接詞)
and I like to make friend very much. (如果用逗點,則比較不通,做個結束比較好)
The advantage of making friend is a lot.(a lot of+名詞,而你沒接東西,所以只需a lot &XXX"的"優點..用of去表達&上下句不完全相通,用句點斷句較好)
You can learn the advantage from their body.(下面那句子不完整,無主詞,可用連接詞去連接,或多加個主詞以你文章句子...
For example,you can see the weakness cite as lessons to be learned, loving, anger, sadness, and happiness someone shares with you, so you know nothing about the loneliness, the point will be you to never know when you need their help.(when從屬連接詞後面不接未來式,句子將改成前面主要子句用未來式,連...
If we just wait for someone passively to understand,(known後面接受詞,所以用understand比較好,... 不需接受 if=>如果xxxy則xxx的意義涵在&我們的=our接受詞,而we(我們)不接...
our friend who can know would be few a lot ,
we will know the friend is very important actively! (這樣才是完整子句)
Say "hello" with person actively, active with person's confabulation,(連接了三個動作則最後一個動作需加連接詞)
and help the other people actively, they will amaze very much your probably active,
and would be very happy you do so!(but 連接兩個相反意義的句子,所以用and比較好)
The name that remembers the other people is also very important! If we hope to be remembered, so we should remember the name of the others first, that will give the person a feeling that is respected, naturally of will like to become intimate with you!
Active with remember the name of the others, is the way that I make friend, share with you!
· 1 decade ago