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--------In recent years, more and more people have the computers, and more and more people are to apply for the internet, so the internet already become a tendency.

One we can use the internet to play the online games. Another to search the up-to-date information or knowledge. Still another to earn the money on the Yahoo Auction , and so on.

--------Due to the internet made lots of progress in our life, many crimes and cheats are appeared. Some people do the bad things in order to make a lot of money .Some students who steal their parents money in order to play the computer games, etc.

--------So how to use the right methods on the internet .We have to strike a balance between studying and playing, such as we can restrict to playing the online games an hour each day , and other times to study or to do anything else.

--------If we can use the internet on good a side , we can know advantages of the internet.

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    --------In recent years, more and more people have the computers, and more and more people are to apply for the internet, so the internet already become a tendency.

    One we can use the internet to play the online games. Another to search the up-to-date information or knowledge. Still another to earn the money on the Yahoo Auction , and so on.

    --------In recent years, with the increase of the ownership of the personal computer,

    More people have the access to the internet. To surf in the internet became a trend.

    While one can play games in the internet, the other can search the up-to-date information or acquire knowledge from it. Some people even make money by doing business on it.

    --------Due to the internet made lots of progress in our life, many crimes and cheats are appeared. Some people do the bad things in order to make a lot of money .Some students who steal their parents money in order to play the computer games, etc.

    ---------Since people life have more involve with internet, the crime and fraud come along with it. Some people cheat and make money in the internet. Some students

    Steal their parents’ money so they can play games in the internet.

    --------So how to use the right methods on the internet .We have to strike a balance between studying and playing, such as we can restrict to playing the online games an hour each day , and other times to study or to do anything else.

    --------So how should we use the internet properly? How can we make the balance between playing and studying in the internet. For example, we can restrict ourselves to play game an hour a day and spend other time study or do other things.

    --------If we can use the internet on good a side , we can know advantages of the internet

    --------If we can use the internet properly, the internet will become the advantage on our life.

    Source(s): myself
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