Angel asked in 社會與文化語言 · 2 decades ago

英文段落~麻煩高手看一下…

我的作業~~可是我句子連接的非常遜~~所以麻煩各位大大幫我檢討一下~~

KTV is very popular for students in Taiwan. It is not very expensive for students. You spend two or three hundreds and you kill all of the night. (花二三百塊可以消磨一個晚上). And you won’t spend too much ticket for public transportation(不需花太多錢在交通上), because it can be found everywhere in the city. Eating is very important too. It is very convenience for students eating in the KTV. Every KTV almost provide buffet to customer. You don’t extra to buy food and drinks in the KTV.(你不必額外買東西到ktv). KTV is well suit for students to get together with friends. You could hold a party to celebrate your friends and class reunion. The stateroom will make atmosphere more enthusiastic. (小包廂會讓氣氛更加熱烈) Many students like to go to KTV after the final exams. You could shout heartily, laugh heartily there. (釋放因考試所積壓的壓力)

中文的地方表示不確定或不會的…希望大家有空可以幫我看看~~

Update:

哇~~真的很謝謝你…但是最後一句"釋放因考試所累積的壓力"還是沒有解答耶~~

可以麻煩好心人的教導嗎??

Update 2:

you are a good guy ~~~哄冬尼阿里阿多…!!!!

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  • Anonymous
    2 decades ago
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    1.這句 You spend two or three hundreds and you kill all of the night

    改成這樣比較好 You can spend two or three hundred dollars and you can sing for whole night.

    2.這句 And you won’t spend too much ticket for public transportation

    改成這樣比較好 And you don't have to spend to much money on public transportations

    3.這句 Every KTV almost provide buffet to customer

    改成這樣比較好 almost every KTV provide food to the customers

    4.這句 You don’t extra to buy food and drinks in the KTV

    改成這樣比較好 You don't have to buy food from outside to KTV

    5.這句 You could hold a party to celebrate your friends and class reunion

    改成這樣比較好 You can organise a party to celebrate your friends or class reunion

    6.這句 Many students like to go to KTV after the final exams

    改成這樣比較好 Many students likes to go to KTV after final exam

    7.這句 You could shout heartily, laugh heartily there

    改成這句比較好 You can shout and laugh as loud as you want yo express your pressure

    2005-10-15 21:24:32 補充:

    那句幫你改囉~~第7個

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