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I have the interest of cook,but I have never cook before.Because I have never cook,so I choose a easy food to be my subject. It called "sandwich".Here is the recipe. First,cut off the crusts of the bread.Then, cut the ham and cheese into four servings and cut the bread into four triangles.Next, fry... show more I have the interest of cook,but I have never cook before.Because I have never cook,so I choose a easy food to be my subject. It called "sandwich".Here is the recipe.
First,cut off the crusts of the bread.Then, cut the ham and cheese into four servings and cut the bread into four triangles.Next, fry the egg and then cut the egg into four servings.After that,put the bread and hams into the oven to bake about twe to four minutes.Then,take out the toast and spread mayonaise on it .Next,lay the ham on the toast, then cheese and another toast triangle.Finally,lay the egg on the top of the toast and close it.Gathered campletes!
This sandwich will serve four people. You can put it on a plate, it will look better and delicious.You can drink a cup of milk or milktea with sandwich.
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