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This is the conclusion of my speech, and it's about anxiety disorders... Could you help me to check this?? Is that appropriate?? Or I should add more?? If I need to, could you give me some suggestions?? Anxiety is a kind of moody reaction that everyone all has it and it is very ordinary. The stress, bad mood... show more This is the conclusion of my speech, and it's about anxiety disorders...
Could you help me to check this??
Is that appropriate??
Or I should add more??
If I need to, could you give me some suggestions??

Anxiety is a kind of moody reaction that everyone all has it and it is very ordinary.
The stress, bad mood will cause it or something influences you a lot.
So, learn to ease, relax, and find the way to cut down your stress is really important.
And I hope everyone will have the healthy body and healthy mind.
Thank you for your attention...

BTW---it's an oral presentation...tks...
Update: thanks for your answers...
actually this is my first time to ask the question...
i'm so happy to see your useful responses"presently". lol...
cuz i know there are a lot of people giving the wrong answers here.
tks, really...
especially mathLord's additional remarks
^@^...
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