((急!))英文信!! 麻煩英文好的大大了!(10點喲!)

我要寄一封信給學校問看看到底有沒有收到我所有的資料了,但是又怕打的不好,

文法打錯還是格式有問題... 麻煩了解的大大幫我修改順一點 或者說柔和一點@@" 我怕這樣口氣會不會讓人覺得不太好? 但是更深入我就不太行了..謝謝喔!

Dear Admission office,

My name is XXX. I've submitted my statement of purpose, proof of residency, letter of reference, and portfolio by last week to complete my application file. I'm just wondering is my file processing the review now? I know school will be start in few weeks, hope everything is going smoothly now.

Cincerely,

XXX

Update:

啊~怎沒發現>..<a 哈... sincerely.....

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Cincerely, ~~錯字

    試著改了一下:

    以下是我的版本:

    TO : Admission Office

    Dear Sir and Madam,

    My name is XXX. I’ve submitted documents including my statement of purpose, proof of residency, letter of reference, and portfolio to you last week to complete my application. Please kindly inform me about my file processing status as I know that school will be start in few weeks. Time is tight to finish my application.

    I hope that everything is going smoothly.

    Looking forward to hear from you soon.

    Sincerely Yours,

    XXX

    希望有幫到你

    2005-08-29 10:39:54 補充:

    有機會大家一起切磋嘛!!別說請教,我自己英文也不怎麼樣啊!

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  • 1 decade ago

    不好意思,那ㄍ..好像不太需要翻譯...那是我自己打ㄉ阿@@" 我當然知道自己在打什麼^^a btw還是謝謝!

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  • 1 decade ago

    你寫的以經很不錯了,

    如果是我的話:

    Dear Sir and Madam,

    My name is XXX. Last week I been applied my application file with my proof of residency, letter of reference, and portfolio.May I ask is that my application file start to review now? I know school begins in few weeks, hope everything is going smoothly.

    Sincerely,

    XXX

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  • 1 decade ago

    樓上的,翻譯會怪是因為單字有很多不同的意思,你要看前後文的意思才能知道那個單字在『那篇文章』是什麼意思啊。。。

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    翻譯出來  好像怪怪的-*-

    親愛的入場辦公室, 我的名字是XXX 。我在上星期以前遞交了目的我的居住聲明, 證明, 調查信, 和股份單完成我的應用文件。我是正義想知道現在是我文件處理回顧? 我知道一切順利地去現在的學校將是開始在少量星期, 希望。 Cincerely,

    只能幫妳翻出來 看哪裡怪怪的 

    不能幫妳修正 抱歉囉!

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