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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

correct grammars...@1

My dog, Fly, he is a tape of margis. He looks like a cloud and he has white hair and round eyes. He is about 5 years old right now, but I still feel he like a spoiled kid seemingly.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    My dog, Fly, he is a (maltese). He looks like a cloud and he has white hair and round eyes. (Althrough) he is about 5 years old right now, seemingly, I still feel (that) he (is) like a spoiled kid .

    Maltese 這是你的狗,對嗎?

    http://www.dogbreedinfo.com/maltese.htm

    I put all my corrections in ( )

    2005-08-17 05:04:08 補充:

    用"it",用"he", 用"she" are all O.K.

    如果你不相信我,你可問任何一個美國人

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  • 1 decade ago

    其實我建議狗狗的主詞 還是用 "it" 比較適合..雖很愛他 但有些時候..還是要注意一下唷

    2005-08-17 19:41:05 補充:

    感謝 收到LO

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  • 1 decade ago

    My dog, Fly, is a tape of margis. He looks like a cloud and he has white hair and round eyes. He is about 5 years old right now, but I still feel he like a spoiled kid seemingly.

    不錯阿 幾乎都對. 第一句要注意一下,一個句子只能有一個主詞和動詞, 所以我把你的 he 去掉.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    My dog, Fly, is a tape of margis. He looks like a cloud and he has white hair and round eyes. He is about 5 years old, but I still feel he seems like a spoiled kid.

    ※記得逗點和句點後面要打上一個空白鍵喔

    Source(s): IMHO
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