英文高手-(英文信)看是否有不對的地方

Dear Ms. Hong: Hi, teacher, my name is XXX. I appreciate you to give me the opportunity to write this letter.Besides, let’s learn to how to write an English letter and increase my knowledge. On the other hand, I felt tensely when I went to English class in school in the all day long. Of course, I have a big... show more Dear Ms. Hong:
Hi, teacher, my name is XXX. I appreciate you to give me the opportunity to write this letter.Besides, let’s learn to how to write an English letter and increase my knowledge.
On the other hand, I felt tensely when I went to English class in school in the all day long. Of course, I have a big trouble with listening, speaking, writing and other now. I work during the day and go to school in the evening, so I’m studying so short.
Don’t worry .I take my holiday doing preview, review a lot of subjects. After all, English is important in the future and Knowledge is power.
In fact, what I admire about Ms. Hong is his professional knowledge and teaching attitude. What’s more, Ms.Hong believes anybody and don’t give up. Thanks for professor reading this poor English letter. And I wish one day, I could also do some contribution to ISU.I hope you’ll write me back.
Sincerely,
Your student, XXX
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