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天氣: 雨轉晴

心情:失神狀態

The weather: Mon, April 20, A shower in the morning, later fine.

My mood: I was out of it.

這幾天真是忙翻了,今天從昨天午餐到現在什麼都沒吃。真慘! 我真的餓的可以吃下一匹馬囉,乾脆約Betty去吃一頓好了。

I was so busy these days. I haven’t had anything to eat since lunch yesterday. It’s harsh! I was so hungry I could eat a horse.

Anyway, it’s important for me to get a bite to eat at present.

Therefore, I called Bettey out for dinner with me.

到了餐廳,服務生問說要點些什麼?「我就先來點杯柳橙汁囉,然後吃肋骨牛排 」。Betty就說「那我要羊排,這2份都要3分熟」。這家的牛排很嫩的喔!我想我們都該讓自己享受一下人生吧!萬歲……

When we arrived at the restaurant …..

‘’ were you ready to order?’’ the waitress asked.

‘’ I thought I would start off with an OJ and

I’d like to have the rib steak’’ I said.

‘’ I’d like to take the rack of lamb’’

‘’Miss , both of them were medium rare.’’

‘’They must be tender.’’ Betty answered.

‘’Ya! Lets live a little.’’ I said.

Yippee!!

不過身為女性我的我們還是得注意一下自己的桌上禮儀呀!把餐巾放在腿上,然後右手拿刀,左手拿叉,把牛排切成小塊……唉!!有時候身為女性真是麻煩呀~~

Being girls, we had to watch our table manner! Placed the napkin on our lap and then held the knife in our right hand, the fork in our left hand and cut the steak into small pieces.

‘’sigh’’! its sometimes troublesome for women .

過了一會!服務生就來問說: 「還好嗎?還吃得下嗎? 」哈!!你知道嗎?我突然看到一塊巧克力蛋糕,看起來好吃極了!濃郁又濕潤!當然囉,我就毫不猶豫的說: 「小姐,除了雪酪以外全部甜點都要」。服務生似乎被我嚇到了說…..

After a while, the waitress came and asked ‘’ how was everything’’?

‘’ did you save any room for dessert?’’

Suddenly, I looked at that chocolate cake. Looks yummy!

Rich and moist, hmm…..

‘’ everything but the sherbet, plz’’ I answered without any hesitation.

The waitress seemed to be scared by me.

現在我發覺自己真是快撐爆了….就算美食當前,也引起不了我的興趣囉…………

Now, I wouldn’t have any interest even though all the delicious food was just in front of me!

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  • 2 decades ago
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    天氣: 雨轉晴

    心情:失神狀態

    The weather: Mon, April 20, A shower in the morning, later fine.

    (通常會這樣用

    Date: Monday, April 27, 2005

    Weather: Shower in the morning and sunny in the afternoon)

    My mood: I was out of it. (good!!)

    這幾天真是忙翻了,今天從昨天午餐到現在什麼都沒吃。真慘! 我真的餓的可以吃下一匹馬囉,乾脆約Betty去吃一頓好了。

    I was so busy these days. I haven’t had anything to eat since lunch yesterday. It’s harsh! I was so hungry I could eat a horse.

    (I have been so busy these days that I haven’t had anything to eat since lunch yesterday. That’s just harsh!)

    Anyway, it’s important for me to get a bite to eat at present.

    Therefore, I called Bettey out for dinner with me.

    (Anyway, it’s important that I have something to eat now, so I called Betty out for dinner)

    到了餐廳,服務生問說要點些什麼?「我就先來點杯柳橙汁囉,然後吃肋骨牛排 」。Betty就說「那我要羊排,這2份都要3分熟」。這家的牛排很嫩的喔!我想我們都該讓自己享受一下人生吧!萬歲……

    When we arrived at the restaurant …..

    ‘’ were you ready to order?’’ the waitress asked. (are you ready to order?)

    ‘’ I thought I would start off with an OJ and I’d like to have the rib steak’’ I said.

    (I would like to have OJ (orange juice) to drink and I’d like to have the rib steak – start off 通常會用在頭盤~ 跟飲料不太一樣.. 但是你的文法絕對沒錯)

    ‘’ I’d like to take the rack of lamb,”(said Betty)

    ‘’Miss , both of them were medium rare(?” asked the waitress)

    ‘’They must be tender.’’ Betty answered.

    ‘’Ya! Lets live a little.’’ I said.

    Yippee!!

    不過身為女性我的我們還是得注意一下自己的桌上禮儀呀!把餐巾放在腿上,然後右手拿刀,左手拿叉,把牛排切成小塊……唉!!有時候身為女性真是麻煩呀~~

    Being girls, we had to watch our table manne(s)!(We) Placed the napkin on our lap and then held the knife in our right hand, the fork in our left hand and cut the steak into small pieces.

    ‘’sigh’’! its sometimes troublesome for women . (it’s not its…. Its 是所有格)

    過了一會!服務生就來問說: 「還好嗎?還吃得下嗎? 」哈!!你知道嗎?我突然看到一塊巧克力蛋糕,看起來好吃極了!濃郁又濕潤!當然囉,我就毫不猶豫的說: 「小姐,除了雪酪以外全部甜點都要」。服務生似乎被我嚇到了說…..

    After a while, the waitress came and asked ‘’ how was everything’’? (? Inside the quotation “)

    ‘’ did you save any room for dessert?’’

    Suddenly, I looked at that chocolate cake. Looks yummy! Rich and moist, hmm…..

    ‘’ everything but the sherbet, plz’’ I answered without any hesitation.

    The waitress seemed to be scared by me.

    現在我發覺自己真是快撐爆了….就算美食當前,也引起不了我的興趣囉…………

    Now, I wouldn’t have any interest even though all the delicious food was just in front of me!

    BRAVO~~

    WELL WRITTEN!!

    Source(s): moi
  • Anonymous
    2 decades ago

    雪酪是sorbet喔^^

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