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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

我的英文短文這麼寫可以給些指正嗎?

英文:

In Ad#1, Tom is the main body of the advertisement, likes the lead in the novel, the play or continual cartoon. From six pictures, you may know Tom not only a chair, but also one kind of characteristic or the mark to the viewer; as for the sell company of Tom to say that, he is also one kind of personification embodiment design in the brand vision recognition system. The enterprises have need of the unique individuality performance intensely. Because the way of brand’s disposition could concrete application, it may suddenly reveal the product or the service difference, and promote the consumer regarding the product or brand favorable impression. Therefore, by this advertisement, the whole penetrates role with the personification, and also produces one kind of interest. The closely links takes advantage of the consumer, the enterprise and the commodity, the three relations marketing technique.

中文:

在Ad#1中,Tom是廣告中的主體,就像小說、戲劇、連續漫畫中的主角,從六個畫面中,可以知道Tom不只是一張椅子,對觀者來說又可作為一種特徵或符號;至於對銷售Tom的公司來說,Tom也是品牌視覺識別體系中一種擬人化的具象圖案。企業需要具有強烈、獨特的個性表現,能將品牌性格具體化,以突顯產品或服務的差異性,並提升消費者對於產品、品牌的好感度。因此,以這張廣告來說,整體是透過擬人化角色,產生一種趣味性,藉此來緊密連結消費者、企業與商品三者關係的行銷手法。

Update:

希望就短文部份給予文法或用字謬誤的指證,亦或這篇短文的不足所在,感謝:>

Update 2:

請問有imrove這個字嗎? 看起來怪怪的 謝謝

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  • 1 decade ago
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    英文修改後如下(根據您中文的意思):

    1. In AD 1, Tom is the main character in the advertisement, like the leading actor in the novel, the play or the cartoon sequel.

    2. From the six pictures, you may know Tom is not only a chair, but he is also part of the characteristic or a symbol to the viewer.

    3. For the company that promotes or sells Tom, he is also one kind of personification design in the visional brand recognition system.

    4. The company needs a specific or unique design to help the brand stand out.

    5. It makes people notice the differential of the brand and imroves the brand's image.

    6. Therefore, this advertisement is expected to achieve the results that bring consumers, corporation and products together by creating an interesting personified character "Tom".

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