不知道是不是寫的很爛?

麻煩幫我看一下大概是什麼樣的英文程度~ 可不可以幫我看一下那裡寫的怪怪的~ About Alaska I love Alaska. The main reasons are as follows. First of all, Alaska is biggest state in American and the weather is very cold all the year. In addition, there is wonderful glacier, mountains, trees and beautiful natural scenes. Moreover,... show more 麻煩幫我看一下大概是什麼樣的英文程度~

可不可以幫我看一下那裡寫的怪怪的~
About Alaska
I love Alaska. The main reasons are as follows. First of all, Alaska is biggest

state in American and the weather is very cold all the year. In addition, there is

wonderful glacier, mountains, trees and beautiful natural scenes. Moreover,

sightseeing industry is the second golconda in Alaska that every year come to

Alaska's tourist exceed 1.3million. The 80% tourists visit here in the summer.

Summer activity includes camping, fishing, mountain climbing, salmon admiring

, beautiful scene sightseeing, wildlife’s observation, stroll museum –Anchorage

Historical & Fine Arts Museum, fossick in the Chicken town. By the way, the

seafood - salmon is very famous, many tourists said that the taste is good and

quite delicious. Winter can fish on ice, dog pulls ski, skee, look aurora and ice

sculpture, etc. Furthermore, I would like to look into a distance from sky in

Diminutive aeroplane. The beautiful scenery can widen my horizon, but it is

expensive. For example, different start off line has different price that a person

from Denali National Park to leave need US$195. In conclusion, I have never

been to another country. If I make enough money, I will have a trip in Alaska

which is one of my favorite area. Last but not least, I have to learning English

work hard for conversation with foreign.
Update: 文法錯誤部分也請指教!Thanks a lot.
Update 2: Furthermore, I would like to look into a distance from sky in

Diminutive aeroplane.]
我的意思是:我想搭輕航機從高空眺望~
(這樣寫對嗎?)
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