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這篇翻譯內容是否通順..

令人擔憂的是近來在美國地區的兒童們隨著年齡成長BMI值 > 95% 而處在過重危險的BMI達到85~95%之間.

The alarming increase in the number of US children who are overweight [body mass index (BMI)-for-age > 95th percentile] or at risk of overweight (BMI-for-age between the 85th and 95th percentiles) has been emphasized in several recent reports.

在這幾個調查數據的百分率比較6~11歲的孩童們BMI值在高於全國的85%(以1963年的全國數據報告提出)在1963年增加15%而1994年增加22%

A comparison of data from several national surveys shows that the percentage of 6–11-y-old children with a BMI above the 85th percentile (with use of the 1963 National Health Examination Survey as a reference) increased from 15% in 1963 to 22% in 1994.

不是很清楚這普遍增加的主要原因.但相信的是可能它那久坐的生活方式和不健康的飲食習慣(例如:過度的食用高脂肪的快餐點心和高熱量的飲料)

The reasons for this increasing prevalence are not completely clear, but it is believed that a sedentary lifestyle and unhealthy dietary habits (eg, excessive consumption of high-fat snacks and soft drinks) may play a role.

普遍過重比率的全國性資料,限定於美國印度裔的社區.資料是從特定的種族和從成年的美國印度裔聚集調查的報告這美國印度裔公共醫療衛生服務顯示出普遍過重[BMI(in kg/m2) 27.8的男性和 27.3的女性]男性為34%而女性為40%,與全國平均標準男性24%和女性25%的比較下.

Nationwide data on obesity prevalence in American Indian communities are limited. Data from specific tribes and from surveys of adult American Indian groups reported by the US Indian Health Service show prevalences of overweight [BMI (in kg/m2) 27.8 for men and 27.3 for women] of 34% for men and 40% for women, compared with national averages of 24.1% for men and 25.0% for women with use of the same criteria.

雖然美國印度裔兒童普遍的數據比大人有限,在1990年檢查了9464個5~18歲的美國印度裔兒童調查發現高於BMI 85個百分比有39%[第2 國家健康和營養檢查調查]

Although prevalence data for American Indian children are even more limited than for adults, a 1990 survey that examined 9464 American Indian children aged 5–18 y found that 39% had a BMI above the 85th percentile [based on the second National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey (NHANES II).

印度醫療衛生服務也在大範圍的調查亞拉丁兒童裡發現類似的情形.在具體的部落中做更小範圍調查的報告裡發現孩童的BMI高於85百分比有25~46%.這些調查都不包括測量體脂肪.

Similar frequencies were found in a large survey of schoolchildren in the Aberdeen area of the Indian Health Service.Other smaller surveys in specific tribes also reported prevalences in children of BMI above the 85th percentile of 25–46%.None of these surveys included specific measurements of body fat.

這次隨機排列的試驗的快速調查的評估主要是防止肥胖的計畫,目標國小3~5年級的孩童們.裡面也包括與運動鍛鍊,食品服務,教學課程,和家庭情形有關的部分.

The Pathways study was a randomized trial designed to evaluate a program for the primary prevention of obesity, targeting elementary school children in grades 3–5.The intervention included components related to physical activity, food service, classroom curriculum, and family involvement.

這個快速檢查的目的是為了要控制學校的學童們在5年級課程結束之前身體脂肪 3%

The aim of the Pathways intervention was to produce a difference of 3% in mean percentage body fat between the intervention and control schools by the end of the 5th grade.

這些課程的細節起因也是在大規模的的檢查報告得知

但在別處還有可行性的研究

Details of the intervention program and results from the feasibility studies that preceded the full-scale intervention are reported elsewhere.

目前報告描述的結果 是以快速調查研究1705位學童身體組成尺寸,可以比較以年齡人體測量學來調查的國家討論這些數據。

The present report describes the results of baseline body-composition measurements in the 1705 children enrolled in the Pathways study and discusses these data in the context of national anthropometric surveys conducted in comparable age groups.

不通順地方請幫忙修改..(謝謝)

Update:

大大修改的真不賴...^^..謝謝你唷..

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  • 2 decades ago
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    仔細地看過一次,小修改幾些詞句,略潤色如下﹕

    The alarming increase in the number of US children who are overweight [body mass index (BMI)-for-age > 95th percentile] or at risk of overweight (BMI-for-age between the 85th and 95th percentiles) has been emphasized in several recent reports.

    近年來在美國地區的兒童們,最足令人擔憂的是~隨著年齡成長BMI值 的超越 95% ,而正處於過重危險的BMI(85~95%)之間。

    A comparison of data from several national surveys shows that the percentage of 6–11-y-old children with a BMI above the 85th percentile (with use of the 1963 National Health Examination Survey as a reference) increased from 15% in 1963 to 22% in 1994.

    依據以下這個調查數據的百分比顯示,6~11歲的孩童們,其BMI值在1963年及1994年分別增加了15%與22%,已相對高於全國的85%(據1963年提出的全國數據報告)

    The reasons for this increasing prevalence are not completely clear, but it is believed that a sedentary lifestyle and unhealthy dietary habits (eg, excessive consumption of high-fat snacks and soft drinks) may play a role.

    並不完全清楚這普遍增加的主要原由何在,但足以讓人相信的是~慣性坐著工作的生活方式和不健康的飲食習慣(例如:過度的食用高脂肪的快餐點心和高熱量的飲料) 是導致的要因所在。

    Nationwide data on obesity prevalence in American Indian communities are limited. Data from specific tribes and from surveys of adult American Indian groups reported by the US Indian Health Service show prevalences of overweight [BMI (in kg/m2) 27.8 for men and 27.3 for women] of 34% for men and 40% for women, compared with national averages of 24.1% for men and 25.0% for women with use of the same criteria.

    這項普遍過重比率的全國性資料,侷限於美國印度裔的社區,資料是從特定的種族和藉由成年的美國印度裔聚集調查彙整而成的報告,依據這項美國印度裔公共醫療衛生服務機構的報告,顯示出在與全國平均標準男性24%和女性25%相較之下,普遍過重[BMI(in kg/m2) 27.8的男性和 27.3的女性]男性為34%﹔而女性為40%。

    Although prevalence data for American Indian children are even more limited than for adults, a 1990 survey that examined 9464 American Indian children aged 5–18 y found that 39% had a BMI above the 85th percentile [based on the second National Health and Nutrition Examination Survey (NHANES II).

    雖然美國印度裔兒童普遍的數據比大人有限,在1990年檢查了9464個5~18歲的美國印度裔兒童調查發現高於BMI 85個百分比有39%[第2 國家健康和營養檢查調查]

    Similar frequencies were found in a large survey of schoolchildren in the Aberdeen area of the Indian Health Service.Other smaller surveys in specific tribes also reported prevalences in children of BMI above the 85th percentile of 25–46%.None of these surveys included specific measurements of body fat.

    印度醫療衛生服務也在大範圍的調查亞拉丁兒童裡發現類似的情形.在具體的部落中做更小範圍調查的報告裡發現孩童的BMI高於85百分比有25~46%.這些調查都不包括測量體脂肪.

    The Pathways study was a randomized trial designed to evaluate a program for the primary prevention of obesity, targeting elementary school children in grades 3–5.The intervention included components related to physical activity, food service, classroom curriculum, and family involvement.

    這次隨機排列的試驗的快速調查的評估主要是防止肥胖的計畫,目標國小3~5年級的孩童們.裡面也包括與運動鍛鍊,食品服務,教學課程,和家庭情形有關的部分.

    The aim of the Pathways intervention was to produce a difference of 3% in mean percentage body fat between the intervention and control schools by the end of the 5th grade.

    這個快速檢查的目的,是為了要控制學校的學童們能在5年級課程結束之前身體脂肪 3%

    Details of the intervention program and results from the feasibility studies that preceded the full-scale intervention are reported elsewhere.

    這些課程的細節起因也是在大規模的的檢查報告得知 ,但在別處還有可行性的研究 。

    The present report describes the results of baseline body-composition measurements in the 1705 children enrolled in the Pathways study and discusses these data in the context of national anthropometric surveys conducted in comparable age groups.

    目前報告描述的結果, 是以快速調查研究1705位學童身體組成尺寸,可以比較以年齡人體測量學來調查的國家討論這些數據。

    註﹕末幾段尚未幫你完成修潤,突然就覺好睏,已加入追蹤,來日再幫你定奪(如不嫌棄的話)。

    2005-04-01 04:24:01 補充:

    呆鴨!有點兒歹勢吶!~因為原說好醒來再幫你把後面幾段譯完~終失約了。

    2005-04-01 04:27:17 補充:

    呆鴨!有點兒歹勢吶!~因為原說好醒來再幫你把後面幾段譯完~終失約了。

    Source(s): 自己前後近八年的遊學經驗能力之累積。
  • Anonymous
    2 decades ago

    哇好利害阿(哇喉塞雷阿)

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