寫了一篇關於sars的作文 請大家看一下有否要修改的 謝謝

what important lessons have we learned from the SARS Epidemic? Dr.B.H said " Infectious diseases do not respect national boundaries." I agreed on it . Two years ago, besides China,Hong Kong,etc, the outbreak of epidemic called"SARS." has spread Taiwan.Due to a lack of dealing with epidemic... show more what important lessons have we learned from the SARS Epidemic?
Dr.B.H said " Infectious diseases do not respect national boundaries." I agreed on it . Two years ago, besides China,Hong Kong,etc, the outbreak of epidemic called"SARS." has spread Taiwan.Due to a lack of dealing with epidemic measures, the SARS had spread so fast and cause several doctors and nurses and people had been the casualties of
the outbreak.

By the outbreak of the SARS, showing many problems we must to solve about preventing epidemic. As for me, maybe this way hold extreme views a little, but I thinked is the best and qick way to solve epidemis spread. we should segregate even if giving up that people who infeced with SARS severely. Because we didn't have medicine to treat them. As an old saying "killing one to warn all". I would rather think how to prevent epidmic spread than saving them.But the most important is the authroity such as medical and science communities, as well as the govern-ment health offices,including people should be self-criticism thoroughly.They lacked for ability about dealing epidemic like,hospital master didn't inform health office of suspicious patient who infected by SARS in the nick of time so causing other people infected.Fortunately,the outbreak of SARS udner the control finally and the govenment learnt a lot of experience about dealing with epidemic.But in fact,they were still many unanswered questions related to this epidemc that remain to be revolved.

However, I have confidence on our government that can be among the leaders in the global community in the fight against SARS. And the lessons we learn may help prevent the outbreaks of other disease in the future.

我是不是有點離題了 我寫作文很容易這樣

另外更加惡化要怎麼講 我想說用more worsen 可以嗎 可是more 後面不是要接形容詞嗎
Update: several doctors ,nurses and people had been the casualties of the outbreak. 這句我是從一篇外國人寫的文章引出來的呀
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