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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 2 decades ago

有關海嘯的英文作文~

怕學測考~先練習一下~

The most important news we know recently is "the tsunami of South Asia".This tragedy have made more than tens of thousands of people die and lose their house and family.

South Asia is the famous resort we know,but it have became hell now.There are many cars and buildings destroyed by tsunami and many childrens losing their fother and mother.Many bodys and buildings are dealt casually and children are sent local temple.Besides,a lot of illness spreads guickly after tsunami happended and a lot of people are infected by cholera.

They are very sad and poor and they need our help very much.In Tawan,many people have comtributed their money to save the victims.We all hope that they can gat rid of the shadow.

希望大家糾正我的文法,時態和錯字~

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  • 2 decades ago
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    The most important news we knew recently was "the tsunami of South Asia".This tragedy has made more than ten thousand people die and lose their houses and families.

    As we know,South Asia is one of the famous resorts in the world ,but it was seriously been damaged now.There were many cars and buildings destroyed by tsunami and many children lost their parents and sweet homes.Many charities from all over the world helped deal with the dead people and children were sent to the safe places.Besides,a lot of illness is spreading quickly after tsunami happened and a lot of people have been infected by cholera.

    They are both sad and poor,so they need our help badly.In Taiwan,many people have donated their money to save the victims.We all hope that they can get rid of the shadow of the disaster. 我幫你修改了一些拼字及時態的錯誤.請參考.如果你在家練習.可以使用電腦工具列中的文法拼字檢測.電腦會自動將錯誤用紅色標出.你就可以自行修改了.祝你學測成功.

    Source(s): myself
  • 2 decades ago

    你可以先列出你的作文名字嗎?作文名字會影響你的內容及下筆!

  • 2 decades ago

    第二段中幾個拼字錯誤:如gickly[應該是 quickly]、bodys[應該是 bodies]、children已是複數名詞,不用再加〝s〞

    children are sent local temple[我認為應該是children are sent to the local temples,要加個 to]

    a lot of illness spreads,前面是說很多疾病應該不加 s吧!

    以上是我小小的回答^^'' 因為我也是初學,建議你拿給你的英文老師批閱會比較有效果和正確喔^^

    Source(s): 個人看法
  • 2 decades ago

    第四行的爸爸你打FOTHER→FATHER

    文法我無法幫妳捏..

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