I need help for a statement of purpose to attend film school?

I need to answer this: Provide a personal statement about your career aspirations in the realms of filmmaking, television, or investigative journalism. This is what I have so far: I want to become an independent film director. I want to use the median of film to tell stories to the world and express my... show more I need to answer this:

Provide a personal statement about your career aspirations in the realms of filmmaking, television, or investigative journalism.

This is what I have so far:

I want to become an independent film director. I want to use the median of film to tell stories to the world and express my view points and beliefs.

How can I make it better? Is it enough?
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