Is this a nice song? (Wrote it myself; how can i improve it)?

I had this as a Facebook status: "If you didn't like me back why did you make EXCUSES? Fine since you don't like me.... we can still be friends but ON TO THE NEXT ONE...." So i turned it into a song! :D ON TO THE NEXT ONE – DONALD SIMMONS If you don't like me Why did you make... show more I had this as a Facebook status: "If you didn't like me back why did you make EXCUSES? Fine since you don't like me.... we can still be friends but ON TO THE NEXT ONE...."

So i turned it into a song! :D

ON TO THE NEXT ONE – DONALD SIMMONS

If you don't like me
Why did you make excuses?
Well if you don't like me
Then you should've told me to my face

Why oh why did you lie?
I say this and
On to the next one (x3)
Why oh why?

We were friends since October
You loved me because I was funny, sweet, and a confidante
But since you don't love me
Now I know just what to say
On to the next one (x3)

Why oh why did you lie?
I say this and
On to the next one (x3)
Why oh why?
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