I wrote this song during my 2nd period midterm? Like it?

I wrote it after I got done with my midterm and had to wait for everyone else to finish. So heres the song. I don't have a name for it though: How do you make me feel inside? It's not complex and I mean what I say It's not too hard to describe I've got these feelings (for you) that might... show more I wrote it after I got done with my midterm and had to wait for everyone else to finish. So heres the song. I don't have a name for it though:

How do you make me feel inside?
It's not complex and I mean what I say
It's not too hard to describe
I've got these feelings (for you) that might decay

When you walk by me
The world around me starts to freeze
I become immersed in your beauty
If another guy comes by I'll tell him suck on these

The first thing I do when you're near
I stare and gaze at you, an Aphrodite
And I think why are you with me? I'm ugly and you're a dear
You're everything I want and more, slightly

Thats all I have... i plan on making verse 2 the chorus and stick the 3rd verse above the 2nd.

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